AD review: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-chunk-flags-01

Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@nokia.com> Thu, 23 September 2010 08:10 UTC

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Subject: AD review: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-chunk-flags-01
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Summary: ready for IETF last call

Please fix the nits below in your working copy:

Section 1., paragraph 2:
>    registry entries for for existing chunk types.  The protocol is not

  Nit: s/for for/for/


Section 3.3., paragraph 1:
>    to use these value to create the new registry.

  Nit: s/these value/these values/