Re: [Tsvwg] AD review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-05

Bob Briscoe <rbriscoe@jungle.bt.co.uk> Mon, 21 August 2006 10:03 UTC

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Date: Mon, 21 Aug 2006 10:42:12 +0100
To: Sally Floyd <floyd@icir.org>
From: Bob Briscoe <rbriscoe@jungle.bt.co.uk>
Subject: Re: [Tsvwg] AD review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-05
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Sally,

At 04:34 09/08/2006, Sally Floyd wrote:
>Many thanks for the review.  We made all the changes, and submitted the
>revised version, at:
>http://www.icir.org/floyd/papers/draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.txt
>http://www.icir.org/floyd/papers/draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.ps
>
>We deleted one appendix (the one on "Feedback from Bob Briscoe"),
>and added two paragraphs to the Introduction saying that all of the
>formal specifications are in Sections 3, 4, and 6.

I'll take a look to check it's all still OK with this appendix removed.

Cheers


Bob


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