Re: [tsvwg] New Revision after WGLC for draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud

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Hi Gorry,

Thank for taking care of the comments. This version addresses my last review.

FWIW, you may find some nits fixes at:


  *   pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-05-rev%20Med.pdf
  *   doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-05-rev%20Med.doc

Cheers,
Med

De : tsvwg <tsvwg-bounces@ietf.org> De la part de Gorry Fairhurst
Envoyé : mardi 21 février 2023 10:31
À : tsvwg@ietf.org
Objet : [tsvwg] New Revision after WGLC for draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud


We have prepared this new revision following the WGLC comments that were received. Please let us know of any remaining issues or corrections that may be needed.

Best wishes,

Gorry & Tom

(Editors for draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud)


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A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-05.txt
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Name: draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud
Revision: 05
Title: Datagram PLPMTUD for UDP Options
Document date: 2023-02-21
Group: tsvwg
Pages: 14
URL: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-05.txt
Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud/
Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud
Diff: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-05

Abstract:
This document specifies how a UDP Options sender implements Datagram
Packetization Layer Path Maximum Transmission Unit Discovery
(DPLPMTUD) as a robust method for Path Maximum Transmission Unit
discovery. This method uses the UDP Options packetization layer. It
allows an application to discover the largest size of datagram that
can be sent across a specific network path. It also provides a way
to allow the the application to periodically verify the current
maximum packet size supported by a path and to update this when
required.



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