Re: [tsvwg] New Revision after WGLC for draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud

[Gorry Fairhurst <[e-mail]>]

On 22/02/2023 11:00, [e-mail] wrote:
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> Hi Gorry,
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> Thank for taking care of the comments. This version addresses my last 
> review.
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> FWIW, you may find some nits fixes at:
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>   * pdf:
>     https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-05-rev%20Med.pdf
>   * doc:
>     https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-05-rev%20Med.doc
>     <https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-05-rev%20Med.doc>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Med
>
Many thanks --- these corrections are now in the Editor's copy.

I also plan to add more clarity about using DPLPMTU within the UDP 
Options processing and using it by an application over UDP Options, but 
that will need the discussion to settle a little first. I'll then push a 
new revision.

Gorry

> *De :* tsvwg <[e-mail]> *De la part de* Gorry Fairhurst
> *Envoyé :* mardi 21 février 2023 10:31
> *À :* [e-mail]
> *Objet :* [tsvwg] New Revision after WGLC for 
> draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud
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> We have prepared this new revision following the WGLC comments that 
> were received. Please let us know of any remaining issues or 
> corrections that may be needed.
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> Best wishes,
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> Gorry & Tom
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> (Editors for draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud)
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> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-05.txt
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> Name: draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud
> Revision: 05
> Title: Datagram PLPMTUD for UDP Options
> Document date: 2023-02-21
> Group: tsvwg
> Pages: 14
> URL: 
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-05.txt
> Status: 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud/
> Htmlized: 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud
> Diff: 
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-05
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> Abstract:
> This document specifies how a UDP Options sender implements Datagram
> Packetization Layer Path Maximum Transmission Unit Discovery
> (DPLPMTUD) as a robust method for Path Maximum Transmission Unit
> discovery. This method uses the UDP Options packetization layer. It
> allows an application to discover the largest size of datagram that
> can be sent across a specific network path. It also provides a way
> to allow the the application to periodically verify the current
> maximum packet size supported by a path and to update this when
> required.
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