Re: [tsvwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud

[Gorry Fairhurst <[e-mail]>]

On 11/04/2024 10:57, [e-mail] wrote:
> Hi Gorry, all,
>
> I checked the diff vs -08 since the last time I reviewed draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud. I only have nits this time:
>
> * incomplete citation: s/the Response (RES) Option [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]/the Response (RES) Option (Section 11.7 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options])
> * incomplete citation: s/ End of Options List (EOL) Option [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]/ End of Options List (EOL) Option (Section 11.1 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options])
> * broken citation: s/ Section 13 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]/Section 15 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]
> * broken citation: s/Section 9.1 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]/Section 11.1 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]
> * nit: s/The method also uses the the/ The method also uses the
> * missing ref: "as described in a previous section": add an explicit pointer to the section
>
> The document is ready to move forward.
>
> Cheers,
> Med

Thanks Med for this review, the changes above are now in the editor's copy.

Gorrty

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>> -----Message d'origine-----
>> De : tsvwg <[e-mail]> De la part de Gorry Fairhurst
>> Envoyé : mercredi 10 avril 2024 10:25
>> À : [e-mail]
>> Objet : [tsvwg] WGLC for comments for draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options and
>> draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud to end 10th April 2024
>>
>> Please note that the 3 week WG Last Call call to determine if the
>> following TSVWG IDs is about to end:
>>
>>
>>
>> These documents both target PROPOSED STANDARD.
>>
>> The document shepherd for the UDP Options will be: Gorry Fairhurst.
>> The document shepherd for DPLPMTUD with UDP Options will be: Marten
>> Seemann.
>>
>> The WGLC will end at midnight UTC on 10th April 2024.
>>
>> Please do read the drafts, and please do send any comments/concerns to
>> the TSVWG mailing list, including notes on whether these are ready to
>> publish (or send an email directly to the chairs<tsvwg-
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>>
>> Best wishes,
>> Gorry and Marten
>> (tsvwg co-chairs)
>>
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