Re: [tsvwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud

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Hi Gorry, all,

I checked the diff vs -08 since the last time I reviewed draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud. I only have nits this time:

* incomplete citation: s/the Response (RES) Option [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]/the Response (RES) Option (Section 11.7 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options])
* incomplete citation: s/ End of Options List (EOL) Option [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]/ End of Options List (EOL) Option (Section 11.1 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options])
* broken citation: s/ Section 13 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]/Section 15 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]
* broken citation: s/Section 9.1 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]/Section 11.1 of [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options]
* nit: s/The method also uses the the/ The method also uses the
* missing ref: "as described in a previous section": add an explicit pointer to the section

The document is ready to move forward. 

Cheers,
Med

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> Objet : [tsvwg] WGLC for comments for draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options and
> draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud to end 10th April 2024
> 
> Please note that the 3 week WG Last Call call to determine if the
> following TSVWG IDs is about to end:
> 
> 
> 
> These documents both target PROPOSED STANDARD.
> 
> The document shepherd for the UDP Options will be: Gorry Fairhurst.
> The document shepherd for DPLPMTUD with UDP Options will be: Marten
> Seemann.
> 
> The WGLC will end at midnight UTC on 10th April 2024.
> 
> Please do read the drafts, and please do send any comments/concerns to
> the TSVWG mailing list, including notes on whether these are ready to
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> 
> Best wishes,
> Gorry and Marten
> (tsvwg co-chairs)
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