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Re: [Uri-review] Request for review of draft-yevstifeyev-view-source-uri-01

Mykyta Yevstifeyev <evnikita2@gmail.com> Thu, 12 May 2011 16:58 UTC

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Date: Thu, 12 May 2011 19:59:35 +0300
From: Mykyta Yevstifeyev <evnikita2@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Uri-review] Request for review of draft-yevstifeyev-view-source-uri-01
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12.05.2011 15:07, Barry Leiba wrote:
>>>> URI Scheme Semantics:  The 'view-source' URI is resolved the
>>>> source code of the resource, identified by<absolute-URI>.
>>> That doesn't parse in English.  I'm guessing this:
>>>
>>> "The 'view-source' URI resolves to the source code of the resource
>>> identified by<absolute-URI>."
>>>
>> I don't object to any of these texts; however current seems better to
>> me.  An application resolves an URI so an URI is resolved by it.
> Trust me, Mykyta: I don't know whether my sentence is exactly what you
> want, but I can assure you that yours is not proper English, and is
> not understandable.  It needs to be re-worded one way or another.
I give up :-)  So I've already submitted the template to IANA; I'll ask 
them to correct this sentence.

Mykyta Yevstifeyev
> Barry
>

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