Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-mta-sts-21.txt
Viktor Dukhovni <ietf-dane@dukhovni.org> Fri, 15 June 2018 18:25 UTC
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A small wording nit to clarify the text, that could be addressed
now, or perhaps even during AUTH48, since this is just editorial.
Section 3.4:
OLD: This specification does not provide a means of associating
policies with addresses that employ Address Literals [RFC5321].
NEW: s/with addresses/with email addresses/
> On Jun 15, 2018, at 2:09 PM, Brotman, Alexander <Alexander_Brotman@comcast.com> wrote:
>
> A few smaller updates for this. ABNF updates, and a few small language changes.
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Viktor.
- Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-mta-sts-21.t… Alexey Melnikov
- Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-mta-sts-21.t… Brotman, Alexander
- Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-mta-sts-21.t… Viktor Dukhovni
- Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-mta-sts-21.t… Brotman, Alexander
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