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Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-mta-sts-21.txt

"Brotman, Alexander" <Alexander_Brotman@comcast.com> Fri, 15 June 2018 18:40 UTC

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Thanks, now corrected.

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Alex Brotman
Sr. Engineer, Anti-Abuse
Comcast


-----Original Message-----
From: Uta [mailto:uta-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Viktor Dukhovni
Sent: Friday, June 15, 2018 2:25 PM
To: uta@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-mta-sts-21.txt

A small wording nit to clarify the text, that could be addressed now, or perhaps even during AUTH48, since this is just editorial.

Section 3.4:

OLD:  This specification does not provide a means of associating
      policies with addresses that employ Address Literals [RFC5321].

NEW: s/with addresses/with email addresses/

> On Jun 15, 2018, at 2:09 PM, Brotman, Alexander <Alexander_Brotman@comcast.com> wrote:
> 
> A few smaller updates for this.  ABNF updates, and a few small language changes.

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	Viktor.

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