Re: [v6ops] New updates are available for draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience

Dan Wing <dwing@cisco.com> Tue, 09 July 2013 17:04 UTC

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On Jul 8, 2013, at 11:41 PM, GangChen <phdgang@gmail.com> wrote:

> Wg,
> 
> We just finished the updates on draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience. The
> latest draft incorporates all the comments during the WGLC.
> You may find the following changes to echo reviews on the
> mailing list, including
> 
> 1) Restructure the document for better readability
> 2) Share several testing results to better convey the experiences.
> 3) Improve the discussions on several aspects of NAT64-CGN & NAT64-FE
> deployment, including networking location, redundancy, Geo-location,
> Quality of Experience and MTU considerations.

On geolocation of a shared IPv4 address, I would prefer a citation to rfc6967 (which analyzes several solutions) rather than the individual document draft-chen-behave-nat64-radius-extension (which details one specific solution).

-d



> It would be great if the draft could receive your further reviews/comments
> 
> Many thanks for your kind helps
> 
> Best Regards
> 
> Gang
> 
> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
> Date: Mon, 08 Jul 2013 23:03:31 -0700
> Subject: I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience-02.txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations Working Group of the IETF.
> 
> 	Title           : NAT64 Operational Experiences
> 	Author(s)       : Gang Chen
>                          Zhen Cao
>                          Chongfeng Xie
>                          David Binet
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience-02.txt
> 	Pages           : 19
> 	Date            : 2013-07-08
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document summarizes NAT64 function deployment scenarios and
>   operational experience.  Both NAT64-CGN (NAT64 Carrier Grade NATs)
>   and NAT64-FE (NAT64 server Front End) are considered in this
>   document.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience-02
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience-02
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