Re: [v6ops] new version is available: draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience-03.txt

Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com> Wed, 09 October 2013 01:56 UTC

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From: Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com>
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>We have just submitted the new version to address the comments during the
>WGLC.
>The main changes are
>1) Add the ULAs statement to feedback Lorenzo's comments
>2) Add the description of bulk port allocation in Section 5.1
>suggested by Mikael
>3) Add the experience description for geo-location service in Section
>5.2 according to Dan Wing and Mikael comments
>4) Add sub-levels in Section 3.1 and improve the description in
>section 3.1.2 to echo Sheng's comments
>5) Polish the entire draft according to the suggestions from
>IETF#87“Document Language Editing Session”

Thanks for address my comments. I support this document to go forward.

Regards,

Sheng

>Please kindly check if all comments are addressed in this version.
>
>Many thanks
>
>Gang
>
>2013/10/2, internet-drafts@ietf.org <internet-drafts@ietf.org>:
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>>  This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations Working Group of the
>> IETF.
>>
>> 	Title           : NAT64 Operational Experiences
>> 	Author(s)       : Gang Chen
>>                           Zhen Cao
>>                           Chongfeng Xie
>>                           David Binet
>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience-03.txt
>> 	Pages           : 20
>> 	Date            : 2013-10-01
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document summarizes NAT64 function deployment scenarios and
>>    operational experience.  Both NAT64 Carrier Grade NAT (NAT64-CGN)
>and
>>    NAT64 server Front End (NAT64-FE) are considered in this document.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience
>>
>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience-03
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-experience-03
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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