Re: [v6ops] WG Call For Adoption: draft-xie-v6ops-framework-md-ipv6only-underlay-05

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sun, 27 November 2022 21:42 UTC

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Subject: Re: [v6ops] WG Call For Adoption: draft-xie-v6ops-framework-md-ipv6only-underlay-05
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This is an interesting topic and it seems useful for the WG to work on it.

I have some general questions about the intent and scope of the draft. I have not done a detailed technical review.

Is the intention to describe existing deployment(s) or to propose future deployment? If it's the first case, it would be nice to have an Implementation Status section per RFC7942. If it's the second case, we'll need to be very careful about what the word "should" means
(and, assuming it's Informational, the one occurrence of SHOULD may be problematic).

I have a question about scope after reading the scenarios in section 3 "Focus on IPv6-only Networks". Why do scenarios 1-3 all say "hosted in cloud data centers"? Surely they should apply to servers anywhere. Also, why does scenario 4 mention "cloud"? It would apply to any data center anywhere.

I find scenario 7 rather vague. I can't see any further references to 5G (or scenario 6, IXPs) in the draft. Which of scenarios 1-7 does the draft cover? This should probably be stated in section 3.

I noticed one detail in section 6.1 "Overview": the address examples 2001:db8::c000:221 etc. could be written 2001:db8::192.0.2.33 etc. That format exists precisely for cases like this.

Regards
    Brian Carpenter

On 19-Nov-22 10:53, Ron Bonica wrote:
> Folks,
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> This message initiates a WG call for adoption for draft-xie-v6ops-framework-md-ipv6only-underlay-05. To accommodate the American holiday, the call for adoption will end on December 9, 2022.
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>                                                         Ron
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