Re: [v6ops] Operational Guidance for IPv6 Deployment in IPv4 Sites using ISATAP

Fred,

I like ISATAP and your draft.

But I'm not sure about
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IRON [RFC6179], RANGER [RFC5720], VET [RFC5558] and SEAL [RFC5320]
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a) it seems out of place in that it doesn't discuss the method used or
service provided by these protocols.
b) is it a round-about way of praising yourself in that you are the author
of those protocols, and of this draft?

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Also in http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-templin-v6ops-isops-05#section-9
the text "[RFC4554]" doesn't web-link to  http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4554
But I can't tell if this is a original markup problem, or draft->html
converter problem.

Thanks,
    John

On 24 May 2011 07:16, Templin, Fred L <Fred.L.Templin@boeing.com> wrote:

> Folks,
>
> I am done tweaking this document now. Would appreciate
> input, especially from those who have expressed interest
> in ISATAP over the past several weeks.
>
> Thanks - Fred
> fred.l.templin@boeing.com
>
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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>
>        Title           : Operational Guidance for IPv6 Deployment in IPv4
> Sites using ISATAP
>        Author(s)       : Fred L. Templin
>        Filename        : draft-templin-v6ops-isops-05.txt
>        Pages           : 26
>        Date            : 2011-05-23
>
>   Many end user sites in the Internet today still have predominantly
>   IPv4 internal infrastructures.  These sites range in size from small
>   home/office networks to large corporate enterprise networks, but
>   share the commonality that IPv4 continues to provide satisfactory
>   internal routing and addressing services for most applications.  As
>   more and more IPv6-only services are deployed in the Internet,
>   however, end user devices within such sites will increasingly require
>   at least basic IPv6 functionality for external access.  It is also
>   expected that more and more IPv6-only devices will be deployed within
>   the site over time.  This document therefore provides operational
>   guidance for deployment of IPv6 within predominantly IPv4 sites using
>   the Intra-Site Automatic Tunnel Addressing Protocol (ISATAP).
>
>
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