Re: [VCARDDAV] Communication Properties rewording
Cyrus Daboo <cyrus@daboo.name> Tue, 02 November 2010 17:17 UTC
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Date: Tue, 02 Nov 2010 13:17:56 -0400
From: Cyrus Daboo <cyrus@daboo.name>
To: Simon Perreault <simon.perreault@viagenie.ca>, Tantek Çelik <tantek@cs.stanford.edu>
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Subject: Re: [VCARDDAV] Communication Properties rewording
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Hi Simon, --On November 2, 2010 1:07:00 PM -0400 Simon Perreault <simon.perreault@viagenie.ca> wrote: >> Intro sentence needs to be reworded - total awkward run-on. > > Referring to: > > These properties are concerned with information associated with the > way communications with the object the vCard represents are carried > out. > > I'm sorry, my main language is not English, and I don't understand what > is wrong this is grammar. Could you please provide an alternative? My proposal: These properties describe information about how to communicate with the object the vCard represents. -- Cyrus Daboo
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