Re: [websec] draft-ietf-websec-origin-02

[Julian Reschke <[e-mail]>]

On 2011-06-24 22:59, Adam Barth wrote:
> ...
> The new version includes Security Considerations, IANA Considerations,
> and a completed references section.  Feedback on the new Security
> Considerations section would be much appreciated.
> ...

Editorial nits: the references section should cite Internet Drafts as 
such; see

 
http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml3/reference.I-D.draft-ietf-hybi-thewebsocketprotocol-09.xml

and

 
http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml3/reference.I-D.draft-ietf-websec-mime-sniff-03.xml

(note you may want to short the anchors)

For the W3C references I recommend the format in 
<http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/rfc2629xslt/w3c-references.html>:

<reference anchor='WD-cors-20100727'
            target='http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-cors-20100727/'>
   <front>
     <title>Cross-Origin Resource Sharing</title>
     <author fullname='Anne van Kesteren' surname='van Kesteren' 
initials='A.'/>
     <date year='2010' month='July' day='27'/>
   </front>
   <seriesInfo name='W3C Working Draft' value='WD-cors-20100727'/>
   <annotation>
     Latest version available at
     <eref target='http://www.w3.org/TR/cors/'/>.
   </annotation>
</reference>

<reference anchor='WD-html5-20110525'
            target='http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-html5-20110525/'>
   <front>
     <title>HTML5</title>
     <author fullname='Ian Hickson' surname='Hickson' initials='I.'/>
     <date year='2011' month='May' day='25'/>
   </front>
   <seriesInfo name='W3C Working Draft' value='WD-html5-20110525'/>
   <annotation>
     Latest version available at
     <eref target='http://www.w3.org/TR/html5/'/>.
   </annotation>
</reference>

Best regards, Julian