Re: [weirds] Applications Area Directorate Review of draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-sec-09

"Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com> Wed, 22 October 2014 14:03 UTC

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Subject: Re: [weirds] Applications Area Directorate Review of draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-sec-09


On Oct 22, 2014, at 9:46 AM, Hollenbeck, Scott <shollenbeck@verisign.com<mailto:shollenbeck@verisign.com>> wrote:


n1) 3.3, it would be nice to replace "a 429 response code" by "a 429
(Too many Requests) response code".

Thanks for the feedback, Bert. You're probably right, but since this is a nit I'd prefer to leave the text as-is to maintain consistency with other RDAP documents that describe HTTP response codes without using parenthetical text to describe the meaning of the code. We have normative references in the appropriate places to do that.

Scott,

Bert has made the same comment on using-http, so the parentheticals will appear in our other documents. I view it as a readability thing, not necessarily a normative reference issue.

[SAH] OK, well, if the other documents are going to change we should make the same change in rdap-sec.

Scott