Re: ID Tracker State Update Notice: <draft-ietf-curdle-cms-chacha20-poly1305-04.txt>

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Fri, 16 December 2016 16:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: ID Tracker State Update Notice: <draft-ietf-curdle-cms-chacha20-poly1305-04.txt>
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The important thing the message is conveying is the new state. The old 
state is background information.

I will take a stab at formatting the message with better visual cues.



On 12/16/16 10:23 AM, Bob Hinden wrote:
> Robert,
>
>> On Dec 16, 2016, at 7:54 AM, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> wrote:
>>
>> A positional change like that will introduce errors in people who have been conditioned to the current form.
>>
>> How about
>>
>> New state: IESG Evaluation
>>
>> Previous state: Waiting for Writeup ID
> Yes, that’s better.  Though, I would reverse the order, that is:
>
> Previous state: Waiting for Writeup ID
>
> New state: IESG Evaluation
>
> Thanks,
> Bob
>
>
>> instead?
>>
>> On 12/16/16 9:43 AM, Salz, Rich wrote:
>>> Is it just me, or would others find "Changed state from ... to ..." easier to follow?
>>>
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>>> Senior Architect, Akamai Technologies
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>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: IETF Secretariat [mailto:ietf-secretariat-reply@ietf.org]
>>> Sent: Friday, December 16, 2016 10:38 AM
>>> To: draft-ietf-curdle-cms-chacha20-poly1305@ietf.org; daniel.migault@ericsson.com; curdle-chairs@ietf.org; Daniel Migault; stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie
>>> Subject: ID Tracker State Update Notice: <draft-ietf-curdle-cms-chacha20-poly1305-04.txt>
>>>
>>> IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for Writeup ID Tracker URL: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-curdle-cms-chacha20-poly1305/
>>>