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Hi all, Thank you for the discussion, comments, and suggestions. Received comments are grouped and tracked at: https://github.com/IETF-OPS-AD/misc/issues. The following labels are used: * has-PR: A PR is created to address the comment. * candidate-future-tool-enhancement: for comments that require datatracker changes. * Candidate-WG-Chairs-Action: for comments that are better addressed by WG Chairs action, rather than a change to the writeup. * Related-Datatracker-Issue-Exists: for comments for which a ticket is already filed such as (WG charter compliance document adoption gate · Issue #7955 · ietf-tools/datatracker<https://github.com/ietf-tools/datatracker/issues/7955>) * Wontfix: the reasoning is provided for each of these issues. Proposed changes can be found here: https://github.com/IETF-OPS-AD/misc/pulls. Each PR is linked to the relevant issue. For convenience, a rendered version with all proposed changes implemented can be found here: https://github.com/IETF-OPS-AD/misc/blob/main/document%20writeup%20template/revised-writeup-after-wgchairs-review.md. You may also use this diff to track the changes: https://github.com/IETF-OPS-AD/misc/blob/main/document%20writeup%20template/diff-after-WGChairs-review-29052026.pdf We are opening a 1-week review period for the proposed changes (Ends 05/06/2026). Feel free to raise any further comment you have by then, either by email or in github. Cheers, Med De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Envoyé : dimanche 3 mai 2026 11:31 À : WG Chairs <wgchairs@ietf.org> Objet : WG Document Shepherd Write-Up Template: Call for review (Ends 22/05/2026) Hi all, The IESG is considering an update of the WG document writeup template to take into account the experience with the template so far. Overall, the proposed changes fall under the following categories: clarify some questions that are vague, update questions that include stale guidance or not aligned with our process, simplify some questions and soften the load on the shepherd, and add few questions to help flag and fix early in the process some aspects that are recurrently subject to DISCUSS ballots. The proposed changes can be better tracked by checking the following links: * Draft update (05/2026): https://github.com/IETF-OPS-AD/misc/blob/main/document%20writeup%20template/document-shepherd-writeup-wg-documents.md * Current version (2022): https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/shepherdwriteup-template/workinggroup * Diff between old/proposed: https://github.com/IETF-OPS-AD/misc/blob/main/document%20writeup%20template/writeup-diff.pdf As a WG Chair, it is likely that you shepherded yourself a document or helped a non-'WG Chair' shepherd (*) complete a writeup. Your experience and perspective are thus important to help the IESG in preparing this revision. We are interested to hear your feedback about the template in general, whether the load to complete it is acceptable, whether there are questions that lack clarity, there are missing questions, or there are questions that you think can be removed because of some reason. Suggestions and proposals are more than welcome. Feel free to raise your comments/suggestions by email or as github issue by 22/05/2026. Thank you. Cheers, Med (*) A call for review/feedback will also be sent to a pool of recent document non-'WG Chair' shepherds. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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