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Re: [Wish] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-wish-whip-13

Sergio Garcia Murillo <sergio.garcia.murillo@gmail.com> Thu, 11 April 2024 10:48 UTC

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From: Sergio Garcia Murillo <sergio.garcia.murillo@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2024 12:47:59 +0200
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To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
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Subject: Re: [Wish] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-wish-whip-13
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Hi Russ,

I have created new issues and PRs addressing them for both minor concerns
raised, please check them and let me know if those PRs will solve the
concerns.

On Fri, Mar 15, 2024 at 12:59 AM Russ Housley via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

>
>
> Minor Concerns:
>
> Figures 2, 3, and 4 are not referenced from body of the document.  It is
> best to include a reference in the body that offers some description of
> what
> the reader is expected to learn from the figure.  When I as a Security AD,
> the other Security AD was blind.  The text-to-audio system that he used was
> surprisingly good, but it could not handle ASCII art.  The discussion of
> the figures was vital to him being able to understand a document.  Please
> help readers that depend on such tools.
>

https://github.com/wish-wg/webrtc-http-ingest-protocol/issues/191

>
> Section 4.2 says:
>
>    In order to reduce the complexity of implementing WHIP in both
>    clients and Media Servers, WHIP imposes the following restrictions
>    regarding WebRTC usage:
>
> I think it would be more clear to say that each of the following
> subsections
> discuss restrictions for WebRTC usage.
>

https://github.com/wish-wg/webrtc-http-ingest-protocol/issues/189


Best regards
Sergio

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