Re: [xml2rfc-dev] [v3] Please help review v3 files

Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> Sat, 03 August 2019 12:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [xml2rfc-dev] [v3] Please help review v3 files
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Am 02.08.2019 um 22:05 schrieb Sandy Ginoza> ...
> a) one of the things we talked about is making the RFC number stand out somehow.  Right now it’s getting lost and because there are no longer page headers/footers, it’s the only place where the RFC number appears.  Henrik had some suggestions about how to do this, but I don’t think any final decisions were made.
> ...

That is indeed a problem, not only visually, but also with respect to
how search engines find RFCs. Maybe it should just be added to the
document title ("RFC xxxx: ....").

> ...
>> The first sample has empty commas in author blocks.
>> The first sample puts the editor's name *after* affiliation.
>
> Right - we’ve been discussing this with Henrik and Heather.  Currently, I believe the display changes depending on what country the authors lists.
> ...

And that's a deviation from RFC 799x that really needs more discussion.

> ... >> I see that there is a blank line for a pilcrow for all figures
without captions.  This might be fixed with styling, but I haven't done
that yet as it changes the width of those images.
>
> I’ll ask Henrik about this one.
> I thought I could get rid of the pilcrows using the same fix as fig 3; it didn't work.
> ...

Placing pilcrows after block level objects is tricky; if we can't get it
right, we seriously should consider not to do it at all.

> ... >> The contributors section in both documents looks terrible in HTML.
Probably because there is no defined way to add contributors in a way
that renders in a manner consistent with authors in text formats, so the
authors choose to use <pre>/<artwork> for that section.  We need to fix
that somehow.
>
> Right - that was the only way we could get the info to display similar to Authors’ Addresses.
> We will discuss this.

Please discuss here:
<https://github.com/rfc-format/draft-iab-xml2rfc-v3-bis/issues/81>

 > ...

Best regards, Julian