Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15

"Martin Thomson" <mt@lowentropy.net> Mon, 05 August 2019 23:19 UTC

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Date: Tue, 06 Aug 2019 09:19:02 +1000
From: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
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Subject: Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15
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Restyled: https://martinthomson.github.io/i-d-template/sample3.html

Another HTML bug: <a href="#figure-5">Figure 5</a> or <a href="#table-4">Table 4</a> would be much easier to style if it had class="selfRef" like all the other such instances. I have a ton of special rules just to correctly style those elements without affecting other links.

On Tue, Aug 6, 2019, at 07:17, Sandy Ginoza wrote:
> Hi again,
> 
> Continuing with our request to review XMLv3 files, we’d appreciate your 
> input regarding draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15. We’re hoping some 
> of you will take the time to review the files and provide feedback 
> regarding whether the updates are as expected and the XMLv3 files are 
> considered “good” v3 files. 
> 
> NOTE: We are aware there is an issue w/ sectionFormat (e.g., it causes 
> text to disappear in Section 4.3.2 of this document). This issue has 
> been reported.
> 
> A couple of other notes:
> - we focused on format only; we did not make editorial updates. 
> - the diff files compare the initial v2v3 output with the files we edited.
> 
> Please review the following files related to 
> draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15: 
> 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.pdf
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.xml
> 
> Diff files:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3-xmldiff.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3-htmlwdiff.html
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> Sandy 
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