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[xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12

Sandy Ginoza <sginoza@amsl.com> Mon, 05 August 2019 23:30 UTC

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Subject: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12
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Hi again,

Continuing with our request to review XMLv3 files, we’d appreciate your input regarding draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12.  We’re hoping some of you will take the time to review the files and provide feedback regarding whether the updates are as expected and the XMLv3 files are considered “good” v3 files.  

NOTEs:  
- As previously mentioned, we are aware there is an issue w/ sectionFormat.
Example: text is missing from the output (Section 3.1) after this XML
<xref target="RFC3550" sectionFormat="comma" section="6.3.7"/>

- Although it gives an error currently, our understanding is that using xref in this manner (or similar) to create a link to a specific section of an I-D will be possible (without relying on the target attribute of the corresponding reference), per discussion with Henrik.
<xref target="RTP-STREAMS" sectionFormat="of" section="5.4"/>

- we focused on format only; we did not make editorial updates. 

- the diff files compare the initial v2v3 output with the files we edited.

Please review the following files related to draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12:

https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3.html <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/d>
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3.pdf <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3.pdf>
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3.txt <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3.txt>
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3.xml <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3.xml>

Diff files:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3-xmldiff.html <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3-xmldiff.html>
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3-htmlwdiff.html <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3-htmlwdiff.html>


Thanks,
Sandy

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