Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15
Henrik Levkowetz <henrik@levkowetz.com> Tue, 06 August 2019 15:31 UTC
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Subject: Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15
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Hi Martin, On 2019-08-06 01:19, Martin Thomson wrote: > Restyled: https://martinthomson.github.io/i-d-template/sample3.html > > Another HTML bug: <a href="#figure-5">Figure 5</a> or <a > href="#table-4">Table 4</a> would be much easier to style if it had > class="selfRef" like all the other such instances. I have a ton of > special rules just to correctly style those elements without > affecting other links. Ack. class="selfRef" will be set on these in the next release. Henrik > On Tue, Aug 6, 2019, at 07:17, Sandy Ginoza wrote: >> Hi again, >> >> Continuing with our request to review XMLv3 files, we’d appreciate your >> input regarding draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15. We’re hoping some >> of you will take the time to review the files and provide feedback >> regarding whether the updates are as expected and the XMLv3 files are >> considered “good” v3 files. >> >> NOTE: We are aware there is an issue w/ sectionFormat (e.g., it causes >> text to disappear in Section 4.3.2 of this document). This issue has >> been reported. >> >> A couple of other notes: >> - we focused on format only; we did not make editorial updates. >> - the diff files compare the initial v2v3 output with the files we edited. >> >> Please review the following files related to >> draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15: >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.pdf >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.txt >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.xml >> >> Diff files: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3-xmldiff.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3-htmlwdiff.html >> >> >> Thanks, >> Sandy >> _______________________________________________ >> xml2rfc-dev mailing list >> xml2rfc-dev@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/xml2rfc-dev >> > > _______________________________________________ > xml2rfc-dev mailing list > xml2rfc-dev@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/xml2rfc-dev >
- [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: draft-i… Sandy Ginoza
- Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: dra… Tom Pusateri
- Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: dra… Martin Thomson
- Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: dra… Henrik Levkowetz