Re: [xmpp] Cross-WG WGLC of draft-ietf-xmpp-6122bis-18
Peter Saint-Andre - &yet <peter@andyet.net> Mon, 09 March 2015 21:46 UTC
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Subject: Re: [xmpp] Cross-WG WGLC of draft-ietf-xmpp-6122bis-18
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Hi Dave, thanks for the review. Comments inline. On 3/5/15 9:57 AM, Dave Cridland wrote: > On 27 February 2015 at 02:17, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com > <mailto:ben@nostrum.com>> wrote: > > We actually did a WGLC on this about a year ago, but much has > changed since then. Please send comments to the authors and both > lists by March 12, 2015. If you've read the draft and consider it > ready to go, please send comments to that effect. > > > Non-Precis comments: > > 1) "at slash at". > > The domainpart of a jid is described as being after the first '@', if > any. That's not always true; consider the following legal jid: > > service.example.org/foo@example.net > <http://service.example.org/foo@example.net> > > This issue arises because the resourcepart can contain an '@', and to > find the domainpart we need to (conceptually) remove the resourcepart first. True. > So I think this implies two things: Firstly, the text at the beginning > of §3.2 needs changing slightly, perhaps: > > The domainpart of a jid is that portion which remains once any portion > from the first '/' character to the end of the string has been removed > (if there is a '/' character present), and then any portion from the > beginning of the string to the first '@' character (if there is a '@' > character present). > > This is ugly text. Well, it is accurate, which is an improvement. > The second implication is that the examples could use the nasty cases > like this. Yes. Will add. > 2) "case folding examples" > > The examples given as 8, 9, and 10 confuse me more by their presence > than their absence, because the resourcepart of a jid is compared > case-insensitively anyway - I don't know Greek well enough to know if > the final sigma would be used at the end of a localpart, but it seems to > me that the capital and lower case sigma example might be best re-cast > as a localpart example. That's a good suggestion, thanks. > (When I read the details of the case-map versus final examples, I > worried that we'd changed the comparison for resourceparts to > case-folding somewhere...) > > 3) "angle brackets" > > The presence of angle brackets in example 16 is, I think, more confusing > than the thing it's attempting to solve; in part because the < does > indeed make the jid illegal under §3.3.1, so I didn't initially read the > explanation... I think it would be best for all of the examples to be enclosed in angle brackets (this is what we did in the precis-nickname spec). > 4) "applicability to what now?" > > Can we change §3.4.1's title to "Applicability within XMPP extensions" > or something? Sure. > I'll see if I can navigate the Turtles of Precis enough to come up with > some comments there. Sadly I suspect I won't be able to sensibly comment > until I've tried implementing. That's quite possible. Internationalization is perplexing. Peter -- Peter Saint-Andre https://andyet.com/
- [xmpp] Cross-WG WGLC of draft-ietf-xmpp-6122bis-18 Ben Campbell
- Re: [xmpp] Cross-WG WGLC of draft-ietf-xmpp-6122b… Dave Cridland
- Re: [xmpp] Cross-WG WGLC of draft-ietf-xmpp-6122b… Peter Saint-Andre - &yet
- Re: [xmpp] Cross-WG WGLC of draft-ietf-xmpp-6122b… Dave Cridland
- Re: [xmpp] Cross-WG WGLC of draft-ietf-xmpp-6122b… Peter Saint-Andre - &yet