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Dear Martin,

On behalf of the authors. A gentle nudge. Does the changes addressing your comments?

Best wishes
Thomas

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Subject: RE: draft-ietf-netconf-distributed-notif-17 ietf last call Yangdoctors review

Dear Martin,

On behalf of the authors Thanks a lot again for the review. Your remark makes perfectly sense. It should have referred to "Notification Capabilities". The "Global Notification Capabilities" already had a reference to Section 5.1 of RFC 9196 where those capabilities are defined.

Here the merge from your input: https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?url_1=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/network-analytics/draft-ietf-netconf-distributed-notif/a8477dd4948ea4cce48b89a8b5d748f49009095d/draft-ietf-netconf-distributed-notif-18.txt&url_2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/network-analytics/draft-ietf-netconf-distributed-notif/refs/heads/master/draft-ietf-netconf-distributed-notif-18.txt
And there the entire diff from the AD review: https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=draft-ietf-netconf-distributed-notif-17&url_2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/network-analytics/draft-ietf-netconf-distributed-notif/refs/heads/master/draft-ietf-netconf-distributed-notif-18.txt

Does that addresses your comment?

Best wishes
Thomas

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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-distributed-notif
Title: Subscription to Notifications in a Distributed Architecture
Reviewer: Martin Björklund
Review result: Ready with Nits

This is my second YANG doctor's review of this document.

My only comment is about the terminology.  This document claims that it imports the term "Capability" from RFC 9196, but RFC 9196 doesn't define this term.
That RFC defines a generic capability model and then defines some specific capabilities, so it is unclear what this term is supposed to refer to.

The term Global Capability is defined as "The overall subscription capability..."  What is a "subscription capability"?

It would perhaps help if there was an example that clearly mapped these terms to specifics.

/martin

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