[6lo] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12
Al Morton via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 31 December 2019 20:02 UTC
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Subject: [6lo] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12
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Reviewer: Al Morton Review result: Has Nits This is the OPS-DIR review of -12 1) "This specification introduces a new token called a cryptographic identifier (Crypto-ID) that is used to prove indirectly the ownership of an address that is being registered by means of [RFC8505]." during Neighbor Discovery in "...a 6LoWPAN Low Power Lossy Network (LLN), typically a stub network connected to a larger IP network via a Border Router called a 6LBR per [RFC6775]." 2) This seems like a worthwhile update to RFC8505. The section describing the Update aspect is helpful, but ... Nit: there should also a sentence in the Abstract indicating the Update status. The scope of operation is very limited, hence no operational issues detected. 3) The SEC-DIR review will likely be more interesting: this reviewer's experience doesn't foster review of LLN in any depth. 4) The Doc Shepherd's form indicates that the last 4 versions benefited from review by knowledgeable persons in the Security Area.
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