[6lo] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh-09: (with COMMENT)

Robert Wilton via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 22 February 2021 10:32 UTC

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Subject: [6lo] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh-09: (with COMMENT)
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Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh-09: No Objection

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Hi,

Thank you for this document.

A couple of minor comments relating to the diagram in 3.2 (figure 2):

(1) It wasn't clear to me why the top left node was a 6LR rather than a 6LN. 
If this is deliberate, it might be worth a sentence to explain the purpose
here. (2) I initially found the bubble around the v6 Mesh to be confusing  - I
thought that it means that all the nodes are interconnected.  I'm not sure
whether the bubble really helps the diagram, and probably could be removed, of
if it is kept, I would suggest adding more space between the bubble line and
the mesh network inside so that the bubble line isn't confused as representing
links between the nodes.

Regards,
Rob