Re: [6tisch] [Roll] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-thubert-roll-unaware-leaves-02.txt

"Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com> Mon, 26 February 2018 18:04 UTC

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>, Routing Over Low power and Lossy networks <roll@ietf.org>
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Hello Michael:

I published 03 addressing what I could  :)

Pascal

> -----Original Message-----
> From: 6tisch [mailto:6tisch-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Michael
> Richardson
> Sent: mercredi 21 février 2018 23:56
> To: Routing Over Low power and Lossy networks <roll@ietf.org>
> Cc: 6tisch@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [6tisch] [Roll] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-thubert-
> roll-unaware-leaves-02.txt
> 
> 
> Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com> wrote:
>     > This is a short draft, but the work is much needed to complete the RPL
>     > story on non-RPL-aware leaves. The draft conforms to the long-standing
>     > expectations from the 6TiSCH architecture.
> 
> 1) can you add a reference for "Routing Stretch"?
> 2) Alternatively, the 6LN may rely on its 6LR to perform routing and
>    forwarding on its behalf.  In the context of RPL, such a 6LN is
> 
>    -> if you want to give an example of such a node, I think that the window
>       smash sensor (alarm system), or the kinetically powered light switch,
>       are two good examples.
>    {I wish I had links to real products that actually ran RPL.}
> 
> section 3:
> s/      Upon the renewal of a registration, this specification changes the
>         behavior or the 6LR.
>  /      Upon the renewal of a 6lowPAN ND registration, this specification
> changes the
>         behavior of the 6LR. /
> 
> The rest of that paragraph is ver hard to parse.
> 
> section 4:
> should:
>    This document specifies a new flag in the EARO option, the 'R' flag,
>    used by the registering node to indicate that the 6LN that performs
>    the registration is a router and that it handles its reachability.
> 
> say:
>    This document specifies a new flag in the EARO option, the 'R' flag,
>    used by a 6LN, when registering, to indicate that this 6LN
>    is a router and that it will handles its own reachability.
> 
>    (...By sending a DAO)
> 
> The rest of the document has some difficult sentences too.
> 
> --
> Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>, Sandelman Software Works
> -= IPv6 IoT consulting =-
> 
>