Re: [6tisch] [Roll] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-thubert-roll-unaware-leaves-02.txt

[Michael Richardson <[e-mail]>]

Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <[e-mail]> wrote:
    > This is a short draft, but the work is much needed to complete the RPL
    > story on non-RPL-aware leaves. The draft conforms to the long-standing
    > expectations from the 6TiSCH architecture.

1) can you add a reference for "Routing Stretch"?
2) Alternatively, the 6LN may rely on its 6LR to perform routing and
   forwarding on its behalf.  In the context of RPL, such a 6LN is

   -> if you want to give an example of such a node, I think that the window
      smash sensor (alarm system), or the kinetically powered light switch,
      are two good examples.
   {I wish I had links to real products that actually ran RPL.}

section 3:
s/      Upon the renewal of a registration, this specification changes the
        behavior or the 6LR.
 /      Upon the renewal of a 6lowPAN ND registration, this specification changes the
        behavior of the 6LR. /

The rest of that paragraph is ver hard to parse.

section 4:
should:
   This document specifies a new flag in the EARO option, the 'R' flag,
   used by the registering node to indicate that the 6LN that performs
   the registration is a router and that it handles its reachability.

say:
   This document specifies a new flag in the EARO option, the 'R' flag,
   used by a 6LN, when registering, to indicate that this 6LN
   is a router and that it will handles its own reachability.

   (...By sending a DAO)

The rest of the document has some difficult sentences too.

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Michael Richardson <[e-mail]>, Sandelman Software Works
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