Re: [Ace] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09: (with COMMENT)

[Mohit Sahni <[e-mail]>]

Hi Zaheduzzaman,
Thanks for your review and comments. The term server is used
interchangeably for a CMP server. Since the document is in the context of
CMP protocol, it's implied that the server is a CMP server. Let me review
all the occurrences of "server" and see if it's required.

Thanks
Mohit

On Mon, May 8, 2023 at 12:01 PM Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker <
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> Thanks for working on this specification. My review did not notice any
> transport related issues.
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> However, I have one observation-
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>   It seems the word "server" has been used in three ways - 1) CMP server,
> 2)
>   server and 3) pre-configured/configured server. I would be great if 2)
> and 3)
>   could be described better based on their role. Right now, this is a bit
>   confusing, for example, when only 2) used and it refers to a CMP server.
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