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Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com> Mon, 08 May 2023 21:38 UTC

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From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>
To: Mohit Sahni <msahni@paloaltonetworks.com>
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Subject: Re: [Ace] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Mohit,

If server here means CMP server only, then let’s be clear about it.

//Zahed

On 2023-05-08, 22:48, "Mohit Sahni" <msahni@paloaltonetworks.com> wrote:

Hi Zaheduzzaman,
Thanks for your review and comments. The term server is used interchangeably for a CMP server. Since the document is in the context of CMP protocol, it's implied that the server is a CMP server. Let me review all the occurrences of "server" and see if it's required.

Thanks
Mohit

On Mon, May 8, 2023 at 12:01 PM Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09: No Objection

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Thanks for working on this specification. My review did not notice any
transport related issues.

However, I have one observation-

  It seems the word "server" has been used in three ways - 1) CMP server, 2)
  server and 3) pre-configured/configured server. I would be great if 2) and 3)
  could be described better based on their role. Right now, this is a bit
  confusing, for example, when only 2) used and it refers to a CMP server.

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