[Ace] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09: (with COMMENT)

Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 26 April 2023 21:08 UTC

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Subject: [Ace] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09: (with COMMENT)
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Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for working on this specification. My review did not notice any
transport related issues.

However, I have one observation-

  It seems the word "server" has been used in three ways - 1) CMP server, 2)
  server and 3) pre-configured/configured server. I would be great if 2) and 3)
  could be described better based on their role. Right now, this is a bit
  confusing, for example, when only 2) used and it refers to a CMP server.