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Re: [Ace] [Last-Call] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-05

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Mon, 13 February 2023 15:04 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Mon, 13 Feb 2023 17:03:31 +0200
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Subject: Re: [Ace] [Last-Call] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-05
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Paul, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On Jan 20, 2023, at 19:32, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-05
> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
> Review Date: 2023-01-20
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-24
> IESG Telechat date: ?
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review.
> 
> Issues: 1
> 
> 1) ISSUE: Form and completeness of the document
> 
> This document reads as a good concept document proposing how RFC 9202 could be revised to allow use of both TLS and DTLS. But it fails to do the work of actually making those revisions. It leaves that work to the reader. It is hard to believe that all readers will infer the identical set of changes.
> 
> I suggest that this document's status be changed to an informational, and then work begin on an rfc9202bis document that incorporates the proposed changes.
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