Re: [Acme] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8555 (6104)

Deb Cooley <debcooley1@gmail.com> Thu, 04 January 2024 11:06 UTC

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From: Deb Cooley <debcooley1@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 04 Jan 2024 06:06:26 -0500
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Subject: Re: [Acme] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8555 (6104)
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I'll mark it as Verified (it was Editorial already).

TY

On Wed, Jan 3, 2024 at 3:32 PM Jacob Hoffman-Andrews <jsha@eff.org> wrote:

> This is about indenting and I suspect email display clients are eating the
> leading spaces. Here's what it looks like with underscores:
>
> Old:
>
> ​___submit another order containing only the eight identifiers not listed
> ​___in the problem document.
>
> HTTP/1.1 403 Forbidden
> Content-Type: application/problem+json
> Link: <https://example.com/acme/directory>;rel="index"
>
> New:
>
> ​___submit another order containing only the eight identifiers not listed
> ​___in the problem document.
>
> ​___HTTP/1.1 403 Forbidden
> ​___Content-Type: application/problem+json
> ​___Link: <https://example.com/acme/directory>;rel="index"
>
> In other words, the HTTP response block is incorrectly outdented. The
> report is correct, but also I suspect any revision will involve a fresh
> editing pass that would catch indentation errors. Happy to accept or reject
> the errata.
>