Re: [Acme] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8555 (6104)

Jacob Hoffman-Andrews <jsha@eff.org> Wed, 03 January 2024 20:32 UTC

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From: Jacob Hoffman-Andrews <jsha@eff.org>
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Subject: Re: [Acme] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8555 (6104)
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This is about indenting and I suspect email display clients are eating the leading spaces. Here's what it looks like with underscores:

Old:

​___submit another order containing only the eight identifiers not listed
​___in the problem document.

HTTP/1.1 403 Forbidden
Content-Type: application/problem+json
Link: <https://example.com/acme/directory>;rel="index"

New:

​___submit another order containing only the eight identifiers not listed
​___in the problem document.

​___HTTP/1.1 403 Forbidden
​___Content-Type: application/problem+json
​___Link: <https://example.com/acme/directory>;rel="index"

In other words, the HTTP response block is incorrectly outdented. The report is correct, but also I suspect any revision will involve a fresh editing pass that would catch indentation errors. Happy to accept or reject the errata.