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"Owen Friel (ofriel)" <ofriel@cisco.com> Fri, 25 November 2022 18:40 UTC

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From: "Owen Friel (ofriel)" <ofriel@cisco.com>
To: Reese Enghardt <ietf@tenghardt.net>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-subdomains-04
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Thank you Reese for the review and comments.

I created individual github issues for these comments and all other review comments of acme-subdomains at https://github.com/upros/acme-subdomains/issues

I have committed fixes and closed all bar one of the issues raised below. I will comment on that one inline below.

Regards,
Owen

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From: Reese Enghardt via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> 
Sent: Thursday 17 November 2022 01:24
To: gen-art@ietf.org
Cc: acme@ietf.org; draft-ietf-acme-subdomains.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org
Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-subdomains-04

Reviewer: Reese Enghardt
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Section 2:

" Fully-Qualified Domain Name (FQDN): This is often just a clear way
          of saying the same thing as "domain name of a node", as outlined
          above.  However, the term is ambiguous."

These two sentences appear to contradict each other - Is the term clear or ambiguous? I suggest removing the word "clear" to simply state how the term is commonly used, and then point out the ambiguity.

[ofriel] The section starts with stating:

" The following terms are defined in DNS Terminology [RFC8499] and are
   reproduced here" 

The definition is an exact quote from RFC8499. Do we need to get the definition in RFC8499 updated? I am unsure if I should change the definition of FQDN in this ACME document and would prefer to change the definition in the common source of these DNS terms. What does IESG recommend?

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