Re: [alto] Francesca Palombini's Discuss on draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-19: (with DISCUSS)

Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com> Tue, 25 January 2022 12:53 UTC

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Date: Tue, 25 Jan 2022 20:53:29 +0800
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Subject: Re: [alto] Francesca Palombini's Discuss on draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-19: (with DISCUSS)
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Hi Francesca,

Thanks for pointing the remaining comments out. The new version is
available now:

IETF datatracker status page:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto/
HTML version:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-20.html
A diff from the previous version:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-20

Please let me know if you have any other comments.

Thanks,
Jensen


On Mon, Jan 17, 2022 at 11:09 PM Francesca Palombini via Datatracker <
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> Thank you for the work on this document, and for partly addressing my
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> Many thanks to Thomas Fossati for his in-depth review:
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/MKG2Cdin96WLcksnA6nAu6pvThM/ ,
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> Alexey Melnikov for his media-types review:
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> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/media-types/uGakYYYPVjBEwei9isTaluPwhDE/
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> Only 2 small changes noted by Alexey are still missing - quoting the
> relevant
> text in his mail
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> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/media-types/LU4gHAY4fQZ6vK7rh8pdSfDwTO0/
> :
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> 1. >>     Also when you split the registration template into 2 it would be
>    >>     good to have a sentence here explaining how the two formats
> differ.
> >
> >
> > Thanks for the suggestion. Could you kindly give us some further
> > examples about what should be explained? Do we need to explain the
> > different cases where the two subtypes should be used, or just explain
> > the difference between the two registration forms?
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> The former. If I as an implementor read the registration, I need to
> decide whether or not I should implement processing of this particular
> media type.
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> 2. I've just realized that you are also missing "Fragment identifier
> considerations:" field after this one. (See RFC 6838) Having it as "N/A"
> is fine.
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> Francesca
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