Re: [alto] Francesca Palombini's Discuss on draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-19: (with DISCUSS)

Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com> Tue, 25 January 2022 13:21 UTC

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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [alto] Francesca Palombini's Discuss on draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-19: (with DISCUSS)
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Hi Jensen,

Thank you for addressing all the comments! I have cleared my DISCUSS.

Francesca

From: iesg <iesg-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com>
Date: Tuesday, 25 January 2022 at 14:01
To: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
Cc: alto-chairs <alto-chairs@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto@ietf.org <draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto@ietf.org>, IETF ALTO <alto@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [alto] Francesca Palombini's Discuss on draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-19: (with DISCUSS)
Hi Francesca,

Thanks for pointing the remaining comments out. The new version is available now:

IETF datatracker status page: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto/
HTML version: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-20.html
A diff from the previous version: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-20

Please let me know if you have any other comments.

Thanks,
Jensen


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DISCUSS:
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Thank you for the work on this document, and for partly addressing my previous
DISCUSS.

Many thanks to Thomas Fossati for his in-depth review:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/MKG2Cdin96WLcksnA6nAu6pvThM/ , and to
Alexey Melnikov for his media-types review:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/media-types/uGakYYYPVjBEwei9isTaluPwhDE/.

Only 2 small changes noted by Alexey are still missing - quoting the relevant
text in his mail
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/media-types/LU4gHAY4fQZ6vK7rh8pdSfDwTO0/:

1. >>     Also when you split the registration template into 2 it would be
   >>     good to have a sentence here explaining how the two formats differ.
>
>
> Thanks for the suggestion. Could you kindly give us some further
> examples about what should be explained? Do we need to explain the
> different cases where the two subtypes should be used, or just explain
> the difference between the two registration forms?

The former. If I as an implementor read the registration, I need to
decide whether or not I should implement processing of this particular
media type.

2. I've just realized that you are also missing "Fragment identifier
considerations:" field after this one. (See RFC 6838) Having it as "N/A"
is fine.

Francesca





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