Re: [alto] Meeting Info for Jan 12, 2021

Dear Qin, Kai,

Thank you so much for checking. I have updated the document and addressed
all missing comments. A new version is being uploaded now.

Thanks again!
Richard

On Tue, Jan 12, 2021 at 12:57 AM Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com> wrote:

> Hi, Richard:
>
> Thanks for the update on performance metrics draft in v-13, you missed the
> review comments from Kai
>
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/PQy-QNz6UfTI6GxOPWCzc0VkHRo/
>
> Checking Kai’s comments, I found some of them have been addressed, some of
> them not, e. g.,
>
> 1.Page 15,Example 3
>
> s/delay-var/delay-variation
>
> 2.Page 8
>
> s/with letter p /with letter "p"
>
> 3 Page 6, sec 2.1
>
> remove "and" before sla
>
> s/latency typically do /latency typically does
>
> For Jensen’s comments, I see one issue is newly introduced, i.e., the term
> “metric value” and “metric’s value”
>
> Are used inconsistently, I suggest to change metric’s value into metric
> value.
>
> I hope these comments can be addressed before being moved forward.
>
>
>
> -Qin
>
> *发件人:* alto [mailto:alto-bounces@ietf.org] *代表 *Y. Richard Yang
> *发送时间:* 2021年1月12日 13:36
> *收件人:* Kai Gao <kaigao@scu.edu.cn>
> *抄送:* alto-weekly-meeting@googlegroups.com; IETF ALTO <alto@ietf.org>
> *主题:* Re: [alto] Meeting Info for Jan 12, 2021
>
>
>
> Hi all,
>
>
>
> I have to skip the meeting this morning.
>
>
>
> One quick update is on the first agenda item: an updated version of
> performance metrics is just posted and we believe that it has addressed all
> of the review comments by Danny and Jensen.
>
>
>
> Richard
>
>
>
>
>
> On Mon, Jan 11, 2021 at 10:36 AM <kaigao@scu.edu.cn> wrote:
>
> Dear all,
>
>
>
> This is a friendly reminder that we will have an ALTO weekly meeting at *9:00
> am US EST (3:00 pm CET, 10:00 pm Beijing Time) on Jan 12, 2021*.
>
>
>
> Agenda:
>
>
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> - IETF 110: Working group drafts and individual drafts
>
> - NAI workshop
>
>
>
> If anyone wants to put other topics on the agenda, please let me know or
> use the agenda bash in the beginning of the meeting.
>
>
>
> Bridge: https://yale.zoom.us/my/yryang
>
>
>
> Best,
>
> Kai
>
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