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Re: [Anima] Shepherd review pls: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-grasp-distribution-10.txt

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Mon, 12 February 2024 13:53 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Anima] Shepherd review pls: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-grasp-distribution-10.txt
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Hi, I have updated the Shepherd review of anima-grasp-distribution.
Section 5.2.1 is much improved, thank you.

1) The DT still does not give the intended status for the draft
("Experimental").  The document has the correct status.
2) The document should say it Updates (Extends) RFC8990.

I have updated the write-up.

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Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
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