Re: [Anima] Adam Roach's Discuss on draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Tue, 16 July 2019 21:34 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Anima] Adam Roach's Discuss on draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Michael --

Thanks so much for your work on closing this issue. Assuming the rest of 
the WG agrees with it, your proposed text satisfies my concern. I've 
indicated two minor nits below.

On 7/16/19 12:55 PM, Michael Richardson wrote:
>        <t>
>          As specified in the ANIMA charter, this work "..focuses on
>          professionally-managed networks."  Such a network has an operator
>          and can do things like install, configure and operate the
>          Registrar function.  The operator makes purchasing decisions
>          and is aware of what manufacturers it expects to see on it's
>          network.
>        </t>


Nit: "...on its network..."


>        <t>
>          Such an operator is also capable of performing bootstrapping of a
>          device using a serial-console (craft console). The zero-touch
>          mechanism presented in this and the ACP document represents a


Nit: add a citation for "ACP document"


Thanks!

/a