Re: [apps-discuss] draft-yevstifeyev-abnf-separated-lists-01.txt

"Thomson, Martin" <Martin.Thomson@andrew.com> Thu, 09 December 2010 22:31 UTC

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To: Mykyta Yevstifeyev <evnikita2@gmail.com>, "apps-discuss@ietf.org" <apps-discuss@ietf.org>
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Hi Mykyta,

I'd be interested in hearing your response to:

https://www.ietf.org/ibin/c5i?mid=6&rid=49&gid=0&k1=933&k2=54772&tid=1291933409
https://www.ietf.org/ibin/c5i?mid=6&rid=49&gid=0&k1=933&k2=54773&tid=1291933409

This regards the use of LWS, the definition of ABNF for the new construct, and a few other things that you didn't address in this latest revision.

The new BNF seems more correct, though at a price in complexity (and a new syntactical invention).  The definition of 'f' is quite strange, especially since they don't seem to be linked back to n and m.

You don't need to be so rigorous in your definition of the expansion.  I'd prefer to see more rigour devoted to the ABNF for the ABNF.

--Martin


On 2010-12-09 at 04:42:58, Mykyta Yevstifeyev wrote:
> Hello all,
> 
> I have uploaded the new version (-02) of my draft
> for ABNF for separated lists.
> 
> Here is the link:
> 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-yevstifeyev-abnf-separated-
> lists/?include_text=1
> 
> Among other, there is updated ABNF for defined
> construction which is OK for cases when n = 0,
> n >= 1 and other cases.
> 
> Any suggestions are welcome.
> 
> All the best,
> Mykyta Yevstifeyev
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