Re: [aqm] Spencer Dawkins' Yes on draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11: (with COMMENT)

Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 10 June 2016 13:21 UTC

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From: Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 08:21:01 -0500
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Subject: Re: [aqm] Spencer Dawkins' Yes on draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11: (with COMMENT)
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On Fri, Jun 10, 2016 at 6:38 AM, Kuhn Nicolas <Nicolas.Kuhn@cnes.fr> wrote:

> Dear Spencer Dawkins,
>
> Thank you for your review and sorry for the delay of our answer. We will
> consider your comments as you can see inline.
> We will push an updated version including the changes as soon as possible.
> Please find attached to this email the diff between v11 and expected v12.
>
> Kind regards,
>
> The authors
>
> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Spencer Dawkins [mailto:spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com]
> Envoyé : mercredi 18 mai 2016 23:12
> À : The IESG
> Cc : draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines@ietf.org; wes@mti-systems.com;
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> Objet : Spencer Dawkins' Yes on draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11: (with
> COMMENT)
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> Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11: Yes
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> I'm pretty sure I know what "steady state" means in this text
>
>    The transmission of the non application-limited flow must start
>    before the transmission of the application-limited flow and only
>    after the steady state has been reached by non application-limited
>    flow.
>
> but I'm not sure how someone using this specification knows what it means,
> and it's asking the user to do something specific during evaluation. Is
> there a reference or definition you could provide?
>
> [NK] By "steady-state" we generally mean that the non application-limited
> flow is out of slow start. We propose to add : "The steady state can be
> assumed when the goodput is stable."
>
> (There are other uses of the phrase "steady state" in the document, and
> they would also benefit, but this is the use that needs the precision)
>

That works for me, and thanks for considering my comment.

Spencer