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Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com> Thu, 02 June 2022 14:55 UTC

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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>, Kirsty Paine <kirsty.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-10
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Kirsty: thank you for this review. And authors thanks for addressing Kirsty’s comment. I have balloted No Objection on this doc.

Francesca

From: art <art-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Wednesday, 11 May 2022 at 04:41
To: Kirsty Paine <kirsty.ietf@gmail.com>
Cc: art@ietf.org <art@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr.all@ietf.org <draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr.all@ietf.org>, idr@ietf.org <idr@ietf.org>, last-call@ietf.org <last-call@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-10
Hi Kristy,

Thanks for your review and feedback. We'll trim the abstract to only include the 2nd paragraph.

Thanks,
Ketan


On Mon, May 9, 2022 at 7:03 PM Kirsty Paine via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
Reviewer: Kirsty Paine
Review result: Ready

This draft is clear, well-written and I find only one minor issue as follows:
- Abstract: It takes a while until the abstract tells me what the document does
and it doesn't cover the full scope of what it documents. I would move the last
sentence to the start, and then explain the backstory/specifics if it's still
needed, and include the information in the last paragraph of Section 1. This
will help interested readers find your draft and its relevance to them more
quickly.

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