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Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-10

Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 02 June 2022 15:53 UTC

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From: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 21:23:31 +0530
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Subject: Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-10
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Hi Francesca,

Thanks for your review.

Thanks,
Ketan


On Thu, Jun 2, 2022 at 8:25 PM Francesca Palombini <
francesca.palombini@ericsson.com> wrote:

> Kirsty: thank you for this review. And authors thanks for addressing
> Kirsty’s comment. I have balloted No Objection on this doc.
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> Francesca
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> *From: *art <art-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Ketan Talaulikar <
> ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
> *Date: *Wednesday, 11 May 2022 at 04:41
> *To: *Kirsty Paine <kirsty.ietf@gmail.com>
> *Cc: *art@ietf.org <art@ietf.org>,
> draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr.all@ietf.org <
> draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr.all@ietf.org>, idr@ietf.org <
> idr@ietf.org>, last-call@ietf.org <last-call@ietf.org>
> *Subject: *Re: [art] Artart last call review of
> draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-10
>
> Hi Kristy,
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> Thanks for your review and feedback. We'll trim the abstract to only
> include the 2nd paragraph.
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> Thanks,
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> Ketan
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> On Mon, May 9, 2022 at 7:03 PM Kirsty Paine via Datatracker <
> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>
> Reviewer: Kirsty Paine
> Review result: Ready
>
> This draft is clear, well-written and I find only one minor issue as
> follows:
> - Abstract: It takes a while until the abstract tells me what the document
> does
> and it doesn't cover the full scope of what it documents. I would move the
> last
> sentence to the start, and then explain the backstory/specifics if it's
> still
> needed, and include the information in the last paragraph of Section 1.
> This
> will help interested readers find your draft and its relevance to them more
> quickly.
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>

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