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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: "Julian F. Reschke" <julian.reschke@gmx.de>, "art@ietf.org" <art@ietf.org>
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Julian: thanks for the review! I balloted No Objection on this document.

Francesca


From: last-call <last-call-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
Date: Monday, 23 May 2022 at 02:38
To: Julian F. Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>, art@ietf.org <art@ietf.org>
Cc: draft-ietf-quic-bit-grease.all@ietf.org <draft-ietf-quic-bit-grease.all@ietf.org>, last-call@ietf.org <last-call@ietf.org>, quic@ietf.org <quic@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-bit-grease-03
On Sun, May 22, 2022, at 21:08, Julian Reschke via Datatracker wrote:
> The draft looks ready to me. Found one nit: Section 5 refers to "Section 22.2
> of [QUIC]", but the correct target seems to be 22.3.

Thanks Julian, you are right and I've fixed the reference.

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