Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9514 <draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-14> for your review

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Hi Alanna,

Thanks for the edits.

I approve the document.

Thanks,
--Bruno


From: Ketan Talaulikar <[e-mail]>
Sent: Tuesday, November 21, 2023 6:41 AM
To: Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]>
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Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9514 <draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-14> for your review

Hi Alanna,

After reviewing the full text, I would suggest the following text change

OLD:
Only undefined flags MUST be set to 0 when originating and ignored on receipt.

NEW:
Undefined flags MUST be set to 0 when originating and ignored on receipt.

Along with the above change, please take this as an approval from my side.

Thanks,
Ketan


On Tue, Nov 21, 2023 at 12:43 AM Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
Hi Ketan,

We have updated that text in the files.

Updated XML file:
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.xml

Updated output files:
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.txt
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.pdf
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.html

Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-auth48diff.html

Diff files showing all changes:
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-diff.html
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-rfcdiff.html (side-by-side diff)
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-alt-diff.html (diff showing changes where text is moved or deleted)

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We will await approvals from each author and the AD prior to moving forward in the publication process.

For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9514

Thank you,
RFC Editor/ap

> On Nov 20, 2023, at 9:54 AM, Ketan Talaulikar <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
>
> Hi Alanna,
>
> This text works.
>
> Thanks,
> Ketan
>
>
> On Mon, Nov 20, 2023 at 11:16 PM Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> Hi Ketan,
>
> Thank you for clarifying. Does the following text work?
>
> Perhaps:
>  No flags are currently defined for SRv6 SIDs corresponding to BGP EPE
>  or for advertisement of SRv6 SIDs using Direct as the Protocol-
>  ID. Only undefined flags MUST be set to 0 when originating and
>  ignored on receipt.
>
> Best regards,
> RFC Editor/ap
>
> > On Nov 17, 2023, at 8:27 PM, Ketan Talaulikar <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Madison,
> >
> > Please check inline below.
> >
> >
> > On Sat, Nov 18, 2023 at 4:39 AM Madison Church <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> > Hi Ketan and Bruno,
> >
> > Thank you both for your replies! We have updated the document accordingly. We just have one followup item.
> >
> > For the following:
> > > There is one issue with the changed text for "Flags" field in Section 7.1. The following sentence applies only for BGP EPE and Direct:
> > >
> > > Flags MUST be set to 0 when originated and ignored on receipt.
> > >
> > > However, the breaking of the sentence could make a reader think as if it also applied to OSPF and ISIS. Can this be rephrased for clarity?
> >
> > Thank you for pointing this out. Is the intent that when flags are eventually defined for BGP EPE and Direct, those flags MUST be set to 0 when originated and ignored on receipt? Would the following work?
> >
> > KT> It is actually the other way around. Since no flags are defined for BGP EPE and Direct, they must be set to 0 when originating and ignored on receipt.  Once some flags are defined, then this (setting to 0 and ignoring on receipt) would apply only to the undefined flags alone. I hope that clarifies.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Ketan
> >
> >
> > Perhaps:
> >   No flags are currently defined for SRv6 SIDs corresponding to BGP EPE
> >   or for advertisement of SRv6 SIDs using Direct as the Protocol-
> >   ID, but when defined, the flags MUST be set to 0 when originated and ignored on
> >   receipt.
> >
> > Updated XML file:
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.xml
> >
> > Updated output files:
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.txt
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.pdf
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.html
> >
> > Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-auth48diff.html
> >
> > Diff files showing all changes:
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-diff.html
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-rfcdiff.html (side-by-side diff)
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-alt-diff.html (diff showing changes where text is moved or deleted)
> >
> > Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view the most recent version.
> >
> > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9514
> >
> > Thank you,
> > RFC Editor/mc
> >
> > > On Nov 17, 2023, at 10:12 AM, Ketan Talaulikar <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> > >
> > > Hi Bruno,
> > >
> > > I agree with your suggestion. I find it more clear.
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > > Ketan
> > >
> > >
> > > On Fri, Nov 17, 2023 at 9:34 PM <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> > > Hi Madison, Ketan,
> > >
> > > I'm fine with this document.
> > > May be one comment, up to you
> > >
> > > In section 6
> > >
> > > OLD:  This document defines the following new Link-State NLRI type for SRv6 SID information: SRv6 SID NLRI (6).
> > > NEW: This document defines the following new Link-State NLRI type for SRv6 SID information: SRv6 SID NLRI (type 6).
> > >
> > > Motivation: the type number is not otherwise indicated in the rest of the section. I'd have a preference for an explicit mention of "type 6" rather than just "(6)". (I also find easier to be able to find type number by searching for "type" in the document)
> > >
> > > Thank you
> > > Regards,
> > > --Bruno
> > >
> > >
> > > Orange Restricted
> > >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Madison Church <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
> > > Sent: Friday, November 10, 2023 10:59 PM
> > > To: Ketan Talaulikar <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>; [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>; [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>; [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>; DECRAENE Bruno INNOV/NET <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; Alvaro Retana <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
> > > Cc: RFC Editor <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>; [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>; [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>; [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>
> > > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9514 <draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-14> for your review
> > >
> > > Hi Ketan,
> > >
> > > Thank you for your reply! We have updated the document accordingly and all of our questions have been addressed.
> > >
> > > Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any further updates or with your approval of the document in its current form. We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the publication process.
> > >
> > > Updated XML file:
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.xml
> > >
> > > Updated output files:
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.txt
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.pdf
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.html
> > >
> > > Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-auth48diff.html
> > >
> > > Diff files showing all changes:
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-diff.html
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-rfcdiff.html (side-by-side diff)
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-alt-diff.html (diff showing changes where text is moved or deleted)
> > >
> > > Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view the most recent version.
> > >
> > > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> > >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9514
> > >
> > > Thank you!
> > > RFC Editor/mc
> > >
> > > > On Nov 7, 2023, at 4:43 PM, Ketan Talaulikar <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > Hi Madison,
> > > >
> > > > Some comments on the changes made:
> > > >
> > > > a) Sec 7.2
> > > > The BGP PeerNode SID and PeerSet SID SIDs
> > > >
> > > > The "and" is required above.
> > > >
> > > > b) The caption for Table 1 is not correct - perhaps it should be "Addition to NLRI Types registry"
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Please check inline below for responses.
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > On Mon, Nov 6, 2023 at 4:43 PM Madison Church <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> > > > Greetings,
> > > >
> > > > This is a friendly weekly reminder that this document awaits your attention.  Please review the document-specific questions and AUTH48 announcement. Let us know if we can be of assistance as you begin the AUTH48 review process.
> > > >
> > > > The AUTH48 status page of this document is viewable at:
> > > >
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> > > >
> > > > > On Oct 30, 2023, at 7:08 PM, [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]> wrote:
> > > > >
> > > > > Authors and AD*,
> > > > >
> > > > > *AD, please see question #1 below.
> > > > >
> > > > > Authors, while reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] *AD and authors, please let us know if the normative
> > > > > reference to RFC 7752 should be updated to 7752bis (see
> > > > > https://da/
> > > > > tatracker.ietf.org<http://tatracker.ietf.org/>%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis%2F17%2F&data=05
> > > > > %7C01%7Cbruno.decraene%40orange.com<http://40orange.com/>%7C02e864ba4d2644ae030b08dbe2387d
> > > > > ea%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638352504486493467%7
> > > > > CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=VkPSnTD2bViSpByFQArRbM62HNxzuvznG7c3wLqNccM%3D&reserved=0). Note that 7752bis was previously approved and then put on hold by the AD, but it is now back in EDIT state. If we update to reference 7752bis, both this document and RFC-to-be 9513 will be published at the same time as 7752bis.
> > > >
> > > > KT> It is not necessary to update this reference. However, if RFC7752bis is getting published "soon" then it does not harm to update.
> > > >   >
> > > > > Note that this document makes allocations in the "BGP-LS NLRI Types"
> > > > > and "BGP-LS NLRI and Attribute TLVs" registries.  The "BGP-LS NLRI
> > > > > and Attribute TLVs" registry was called the "BGP-LS Node Descriptor,
> > > > > Link Descriptor, Prefix Descriptor, and Attribute TLVs" registry in
> > > > > RFC 7752 and changed by 7752bis. The name currently in the IANA
> > > > > registry is "BGP-LS NLRI and Attribute TLVs". See
> > > > > https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-ls-parameters/bgp-ls-parameters.xhtml#node-descriptor-link-descriptor-prefix-descriptor-attribute-tlv.
> > > > >
> > > > > If you choose to retain the reference to RFC 7752, we will use the
> > > > > registry name in that document ("BGP-LS Node Descriptor, Link
> > > > > Descriptor, Prefix Descriptor, and Attribute TLVs"). If you choose
> > > > > to wait to publish at the same time as 7752bis, we will use the
> > > > > updated name ("BGP-LS NLRI and Attribute TLVs").
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> Please see my response to the previous comment.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been
> > > > > updated as follows. Abbreviations have been expanded per Section 3.6
> > > > > of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide").
> > > > >
> > > > > Original:
> > > > >  BGP Link State Extensions for SRv6
> > > > >
> > > > > Current:
> > > > >  Border Gateway Protocol - Link State (BGP-LS) Extensions for
> > > > > Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6)
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> Agree
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] Would it be helpful to clarity "a separate document"
> > > > > here? Is this referring to a particular RFC?
> > > > >
> > > > > Original:
> > > > >   The BGP-LS address-family solution for SRv6
> > > > >   described in this document is similar to BGP-LS for SR for the MPLS
> > > > >   data-plane defined in a separate document.
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> Yes, that separate document is RFC9085.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] We see two instances each of the following phrases
> > > > > in this document. May we update to one form for consistency?
> > > > >
> > > > > ...using Direct as the Protocol-ID
> > > > > ...using Direct Protocol-ID
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> The first one seems better.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > 5) <!-- [rfced] Should "and using" here be updated to either "using" or "and uses"?
> > > > >
> > > > > Original:
> > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a node is advertised via the BGP-
> > > > >   LS Node NLRI and using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > >   ...
> > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a link is advertised via the BGP-
> > > > >   LS Link NLRI and using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > >   ...
> > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a prefix is advertised via the
> > > > >   BGP-LS Prefix NLRI and using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > >
> > > > > Perhaps ("using"):
> > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a node is advertised via the BGP-
> > > > >   LS Node NLRI using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > >   ...
> > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a link is advertised via the BGP-
> > > > >   LS Link NLRI using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > >   ...
> > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a prefix is advertised via the
> > > > >   BGP-LS Prefix NLRI using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > >
> > > > > Or ("and uses"):
> > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a node is advertised via the BGP-
> > > > >   LS Node NLRI and uses the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > >   ...
> > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a link is advertised via the BGP-
> > > > >   LS Link NLRI and uses the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > >   ...
> > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a prefix is advertised via the
> > > > >   BGP-LS Prefix NLRI and uses the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> Your suggestion with "using" is more appropriate.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify "are identical as specified" here. Is
> > > > > the meaning that the new MSD types in this document have the same
> > > > > description and semantics as the MSD types defined in
> > > > > [I-D.ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions]? Note that this sentence appears
> > > > > twice in the document.
> > > > >
> > > > > Original:
> > > > >   The description and semantics of these new MSD-
> > > > >   types for BGP-LS are identical as specified in
> > > > >   [I-D.ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions].
> > > > >
> > > > > Perhaps:
> > > > >   The description and semantics of these new MSD-
> > > > >   types for BGP-LS are identical to those specified in
> > > > >   [RFC9352].
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> Agree with your proposal.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify "for IGPs, direct, and static configuration" here.
> > > > >
> > > > > Original:
> > > > >   *  Local Node Descriptors TLV: set of Node Descriptor TLVs for the
> > > > >      local node, as defined in [RFC7752] for IGPs, direct, and static
> > > > >      configuration or as defined in [RFC9086] for BGP protocol.
> > > > >
> > > > > Perhaps:
> > > > >   Local Node Descriptors TLV:  Set of Node Descriptor TLVs for the
> > > > >      local node as defined in [RFC7752] for IGPs, the Direct Protocol-ID,
> > > > >      and the Static configuration Protocol-ID or as defined in [RFC9086] for BGP.
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> Agree with your proposal.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > 8) <!-- [rfced] How may we update this text for clarity?
> > > > >
> > > > > Original:
> > > > >   For SRv6 SIDs corresponding to BGP EPE and when advertising SRv6 SID
> > > > >   using Direct Protocol-ID, none are defined currently and they MUST
> > > > >   be set to 0 when originated and ignored on receipt.
> > > > >
> > > > > Perhaps:
> > > > >   No flags are currently defined for SRv6 SIDs corresponding to BGP EPE
> > > > >   or for advertisement of a SRv6 SID using the Direct Protocol-ID. Flags MUST
> > > > >   be set to 0 when originated and ignored on receipt.
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> Agree with your proposal.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] We have updated "SET" to "set" at the end of this
> > > > > sentence. Please let us know any objections.
> > > > >
> > > > > Original:
> > > > >   For SRv6 BGP EPE Peer Set SID,
> > > > >   multiple instances of this TLV (one for each peer in the "peer set")
> > > > >   are associated with the SRv6 SID and the S-Flag is SET.
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> Agree.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > 10) <!-- [rfced] Section 9.2: FYI - We have updated the name of the
> > > > > registry in this section to "BGP-LS NLRI and Attribute TLVs" to
> > > > > match the title currently in the IANA registry (renamed per
> > > > > draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis). Depending on the response to our
> > > > > question #1, we will either use the name of the registry per RFC
> > > > > 7752 ("BGP-LS Node Descriptor, Link Descriptor, Prefix Descriptor,
> > > > > and Attribute TLVs") or the name per draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis ("BGP-LS NLRI and Attribute TLVs").
> > > > >
> > > > > Link to registry:
> > > > > https://ww/
> > > > > w.iana.org<http://w.iana.org/>%2Fassignments%2Fbgp-ls-parameters%2Fbgp-ls-parameters.xht
> > > > > ml%23node-descriptor-link-descriptor-prefix-descriptor-attribute-tlv
> > > > > &data=05%7C01%7Cbruno.decraene%40orange.com<http://40orange.com/>%7C02e864ba4d2644ae030b08
> > > > > dbe2387dea%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638352504486
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> > > > > CJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=gaQ%2FEI6K85rcFc
> > > > > REDGBmBklZCqyiaN2x6y06GocnAks%3D&reserved=0
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> Please refer to my response to the first point.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > 11) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that "set up to routers" is correct.
> > > > > Or should this be updated to "set up for routers" ("for" instead of
> > > > > "to")? Also, is the capitaliation of "Link-State" correct?
> > > > >
> > > > > Original:
> > > > >   BGP peering sessions for
> > > > >   address-families other than Link-State may be set up to routers
> > > > >   outside the SR domain.
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> "set up to" is correct and the capitalization is correct as well.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > 12) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
> > > > >
> > > > > a) We note inconsistencies in the terms below throughout the text.
> > > > > Should either the closed or open form be used consistently? Or
> > > > > should "PeerSet" and "PeerNode" be used when followed by "SID", and then "Peer Set" and "Peer Node"
> > > > > be used elsewhere? We see "PeerSet SID" in RFCs 8402 and 9086, and
> > > > > we see "PeerNode SID" in RFC 9086.
> > > > >
> > > > > PeerSet vs. Peer Set
> > > > >
> > > > > PeerNode vs. Peer Node
> > > >
> > > > KT> We should follow RFC8402 and RFC9086.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > b) This relates to the question above. The name of the TLV defined
> > > > > in Section
> > > > > 7.2 is "SRv6 BGP Peer Node SID TLV". Should this be updated to "SRv6
> > > > > BGP PeerNode SID TLV" (with "PeerNode" rather than "Peer Node")? If
> > > > > so, we will ask IANA to update the registry accordingly prior to publication.
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> > > > > https://ww/
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> > > > > ml%23srv6-bgp-epe-sid&data=05%7C01%7Cbruno.decraene%40orange.com<http://40orange.com/>%7C0
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> > > > >
> > > >
> > > > KT> Agree. Let us update as per the terminology in RFC8402/9086.
> > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > c) May we update the instance of "peer sessions" in this sentence to
> > > > > "peering sessions" to match usage elsewhere in the document?
> > > > >
> > > > > Original:
> > > > >   ...therefore MAY be assigned to one or more
> > > > >   End.X SIDs associated with BGP peer sessions.
> > > >
> > > > KT> "peering sessions" is more appropriate.
> > > >   >
> > > > >
> > > > > d) FYI, we updated "SRv6 BGP EPE Peer Node SID TLV" to "SRv6 BGP Peer Node SID TLV"
> > > > > (no "EPE") for consistency with the name used elswhere in the document.
> > > > >
> > > > > Original:
> > > > >   *  The BGP EPE Peer Node context for a PeerNode SID, and the Peer Set
> > > > >      context for a PeerSet SID [RFC8402] are advertised via the SRv6
> > > > >      BGP EPE Peer Node SID TLV (Section 7.2),
> > > > >
> > > >
> > > > KT> Agree.
> > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > e) FYI, we updated "OSPFv3 SRv6 LAN End.X sub-TLV" here to "OSPFv3
> > > > > SRv6 LAN End.X SID sub-TLV" (with "SID") to match usage in Section
> > > > > 9.2 of RFC-to-be 9513.
> > > > >
> > > > > Original:
> > > > >   The information advertised via this TLV is derived from the IS-IS SRv6
> > > > >   LAN End.X SID sub-TLV (section 8.2 of
> > > > >   [I-D.ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions]) or the OSPFv3 SRv6 LAN End.X
> > > > >   sub-TLV (section 9.2 of [I-D.ietf-lsr-ospfv3-srv6-extensions]) in the
> > > > >   case of IS-IS or OSPFv3 respectively.
> > > > > -->
> > > >
> > > > KT> Agree. "SID" is required in the name.
> > > >   >
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> > > > KT> Ack
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> > > > KT> Ack.
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> > > > > RFC9514 (draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-14)
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> > > > > Title            : BGP Link State Extensions for SRv6
> > > > > Author(s)        : G. Dawra, C. Filsfils, K. Talaulikar, M. Chen, D. Bernier, B. Decraene
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Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc
pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler
a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration,
Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci.

This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law;
they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation.
If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments.
As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified.
Thank you.