Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9514 <draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-14> for your review

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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9514 <draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-14> for your review
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Hi Alanna,

I approve the publication of this document.

Best regards,
Mach

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com>
> Sent: Wednesday, November 22, 2023 2:05 AM
> To: bruno.decraene@orange.com; Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
> Cc: Madison Church <mchurch@amsl.com>; cfilsfil@cisco.com; Mach Chen
> <mach.chen@huawei.com>; daniel.bernier@bell.ca; gdawra.ietf@gmail.com;
> Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>; RFC Editor
> <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; idr-ads@ietf.org; idr-chairs@ietf.org;
> shares@ndzh.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9514 <draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-14>
> for your review
> 
> Hi Ketan and Bruno,
> 
> Thank you for your replies. Your approvals have been noted on the AUTH48
> status page:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9514
> 
> Ketan - We have updated the files with your proposed text.
> 
> Updated XML file:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.xml
> 
> Updated output files:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.txt
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.pdf
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.html
> 
> Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-auth48diff.html
> 
> Diff files showing all changes:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-diff.html
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-rfcdiff.html (side-by-side diff)
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-alt-diff.html (diff showing
> changes where text is moved or deleted)
> 
> We will await approvals from Gaurav, Clarence, Mach, Daniel, and the AD
> prior to moving this document forward.
> 
> Best regards,
> RFC Editor/ap
> 
> > On Nov 21, 2023, at 2:12 AM, bruno.decraene@orange.com wrote:
> >
> > Hi Alanna,
> >
> > Thanks for the edits.
> >
> > I approve the document.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > --Bruno
> >
> >
> > From: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
> > Sent: Tuesday, November 21, 2023 6:41 AM
> > To: Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com>
> > Cc: Madison Church <mchurch@amsl.com>; DECRAENE Bruno INNOV/NET
> > <bruno.decraene@orange.com>; cfilsfil@cisco.com;
> mach.chen@huawei.com;
> > daniel.bernier@bell.ca; gdawra.ietf@gmail.com; Alvaro Retana
> > <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>; RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>;
> > idr-ads@ietf.org; idr-chairs@ietf.org; shares@ndzh.com;
> > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9514
> > <draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-14> for your review
> >
> > Hi Alanna,
> >
> > After reviewing the full text, I would suggest the following text
> > change
> >
> > OLD:
> > Only undefined flags MUST be set to 0 when originating and ignored on
> receipt.
> >
> > NEW:
> > Undefined flags MUST be set to 0 when originating and ignored on receipt.
> >
> > Along with the above change, please take this as an approval from my side.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Ketan
> >
> >
> > On Tue, Nov 21, 2023 at 12:43 AM Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com>
> wrote:
> > Hi Ketan,
> >
> > We have updated that text in the files.
> >
> > Updated XML file:
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.xml
> >
> > Updated output files:
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.txt
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.pdf
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.html
> >
> > Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-auth48diff.html
> >
> > Diff files showing all changes:
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-diff.html
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-rfcdiff.html (side-by-side
> diff)
> >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-alt-diff.html (diff
> > showing changes where text is moved or deleted)
> >
> > Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view the
> most recent version.
> >
> > We will await approvals from each author and the AD prior to moving
> forward in the publication process.
> >
> > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9514
> >
> > Thank you,
> > RFC Editor/ap
> >
> > > On Nov 20, 2023, at 9:54 AM, Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> > >
> > > Hi Alanna,
> > >
> > > This text works.
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > > Ketan
> > >
> > >
> > > On Mon, Nov 20, 2023 at 11:16 PM Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com>
> wrote:
> > > Hi Ketan,
> > >
> > > Thank you for clarifying. Does the following text work?
> > >
> > > Perhaps:
> > >  No flags are currently defined for SRv6 SIDs corresponding to BGP
> > > EPE  or for advertisement of SRv6 SIDs using Direct as the Protocol-
> > > ID. Only undefined flags MUST be set to 0 when originating and
> > > ignored on receipt.
> > >
> > > Best regards,
> > > RFC Editor/ap
> > >
> > > > On Nov 17, 2023, at 8:27 PM, Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > Hi Madison,
> > > >
> > > > Please check inline below.
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > On Sat, Nov 18, 2023 at 4:39 AM Madison Church
> <mchurch@amsl.com> wrote:
> > > > Hi Ketan and Bruno,
> > > >
> > > > Thank you both for your replies! We have updated the document
> accordingly. We just have one followup item.
> > > >
> > > > For the following:
> > > > > There is one issue with the changed text for "Flags" field in Section 7.1.
> The following sentence applies only for BGP EPE and Direct:
> > > > >
> > > > > Flags MUST be set to 0 when originated and ignored on receipt.
> > > > >
> > > > > However, the breaking of the sentence could make a reader think as if
> it also applied to OSPF and ISIS. Can this be rephrased for clarity?
> > > >
> > > > Thank you for pointing this out. Is the intent that when flags are
> eventually defined for BGP EPE and Direct, those flags MUST be set to 0 when
> originated and ignored on receipt? Would the following work?
> > > >
> > > > KT> It is actually the other way around. Since no flags are defined for
> BGP EPE and Direct, they must be set to 0 when originating and ignored on
> receipt.  Once some flags are defined, then this (setting to 0 and ignoring on
> receipt) would apply only to the undefined flags alone. I hope that clarifies.
> > > >
> > > > Thanks,
> > > > Ketan
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Perhaps:
> > > >   No flags are currently defined for SRv6 SIDs corresponding to BGP
> EPE
> > > >   or for advertisement of SRv6 SIDs using Direct as the Protocol-
> > > >   ID, but when defined, the flags MUST be set to 0 when originated and
> ignored on
> > > >   receipt.
> > > >
> > > > Updated XML file:
> > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.xml
> > > >
> > > > Updated output files:
> > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.txt
> > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.pdf
> > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.html
> > > >
> > > > Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
> > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-auth48diff.html
> > > >
> > > > Diff files showing all changes:
> > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-diff.html
> > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-rfcdiff.html
> (side-by-side diff)
> > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-alt-diff.html (diff
> > > > showing changes where text is moved or deleted)
> > > >
> > > > Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view
> the most recent version.
> > > >
> > > > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> > > >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9514
> > > >
> > > > Thank you,
> > > > RFC Editor/mc
> > > >
> > > > > On Nov 17, 2023, at 10:12 AM, Ketan Talaulikar
> <ketant.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > > >
> > > > > Hi Bruno,
> > > > >
> > > > > I agree with your suggestion. I find it more clear.
> > > > >
> > > > > Thanks,
> > > > > Ketan
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > On Fri, Nov 17, 2023 at 9:34 PM <bruno.decraene@orange.com>
> wrote:
> > > > > Hi Madison, Ketan,
> > > > >
> > > > > I'm fine with this document.
> > > > > May be one comment, up to you
> > > > >
> > > > > In section 6
> > > > >
> > > > > OLD:  This document defines the following new Link-State NLRI type
> for SRv6 SID information: SRv6 SID NLRI (6).
> > > > > NEW: This document defines the following new Link-State NLRI type
> for SRv6 SID information: SRv6 SID NLRI (type 6).
> > > > >
> > > > > Motivation: the type number is not otherwise indicated in the
> > > > > rest of the section. I'd have a preference for an explicit
> > > > > mention of "type 6" rather than just "(6)". (I also find easier
> > > > > to be able to find type number by searching for "type" in the
> > > > > document)
> > > > >
> > > > > Thank you
> > > > > Regards,
> > > > > --Bruno
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Orange Restricted
> > > > >
> > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > From: Madison Church <mchurch@amsl.com>
> > > > > Sent: Friday, November 10, 2023 10:59 PM
> > > > > To: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>;
> > > > > gdawra.ietf@gmail.com;cfilsfil@cisco.com; mach.chen@huawei.com;
> > > > > daniel.bernier@bell.ca; DECRAENE Bruno INNOV/NET
> > > > > <bruno.decraene@orange.com>; Alvaro Retana
> > > > > <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
> > > > > Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; idr-ads@ietf.org;
> > > > > idr-chairs@ietf.org; shares@ndzh.com;
> > > > > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > > > > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9514
> > > > > <draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-14> for your review
> > > > >
> > > > > Hi Ketan,
> > > > >
> > > > > Thank you for your reply! We have updated the document accordingly
> and all of our questions have been addressed.
> > > > >
> > > > > Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do
> not make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any
> further updates or with your approval of the document in its current form.
> We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the
> publication process.
> > > > >
> > > > > Updated XML file:
> > > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.xml
> > > > >
> > > > > Updated output files:
> > > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.txt
> > > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.pdf
> > > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514.html
> > > > >
> > > > > Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
> > > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-auth48diff.html
> > > > >
> > > > > Diff files showing all changes:
> > > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-diff.html
> > > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-rfcdiff.html
> (side-by-side diff)
> > > > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9514-alt-diff.html
> > > > > (diff showing changes where text is moved or deleted)
> > > > >
> > > > > Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view
> the most recent version.
> > > > >
> > > > > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> > > > >   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9514
> > > > >
> > > > > Thank you!
> > > > > RFC Editor/mc
> > > > >
> > > > > > On Nov 7, 2023, at 4:43 PM, Ketan Talaulikar
> <ketant.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Hi Madison,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Some comments on the changes made:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > a) Sec 7.2
> > > > > > The BGP PeerNode SID and PeerSet SID SIDs
> > > > > >
> > > > > > The "and" is required above.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > b) The caption for Table 1 is not correct - perhaps it should be
> "Addition to NLRI Types registry"
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Please check inline below for responses.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > On Mon, Nov 6, 2023 at 4:43 PM Madison Church
> <mchurch@amsl.com> wrote:
> > > > > > Greetings,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > This is a friendly weekly reminder that this document awaits your
> attention.  Please review the document-specific questions and AUTH48
> announcement. Let us know if we can be of assistance as you begin the
> AUTH48 review process.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > The AUTH48 status page of this document is viewable at:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > http://www.r/
> > > > > >
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> > > > > > We look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Thank you,
> > > > > > RFC Editor/mc
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > On Oct 30, 2023, at 7:08 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Authors and AD*,
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > *AD, please see question #1 below.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Authors, while reviewing this document during AUTH48, please
> resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] *AD and authors, please let us know if the
> > > > > > > normative reference to RFC 7752 should be updated to 7752bis
> > > > > > > (see https://da/
> > > > > > > tatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis%2F17%2F
> > > > > > > &data=05
> > > > > > > %7C01%7Cbruno.decraene%40orange.com%7C02e864ba4d2644a
> e030b08
> > > > > > > dbe2387d
> > > > > > >
> ea%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638352504486
> > > > > > > 493467%7
> > > > > > >
> CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJB
> TiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=VkPSnTD2bViS
> pByFQArRbM62HNxzuvznG7c3wLqNccM%3D&reserved=0). Note that
> 7752bis was previously approved and then put on hold by the AD, but it is
> now back in EDIT state. If we update to reference 7752bis, both this
> document and RFC-to-be 9513 will be published at the same time as
> 7752bis.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> It is not necessary to update this reference. However, if
> RFC7752bis is getting published "soon" then it does not harm to update.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > > Note that this document makes allocations in the "BGP-LS NLRI
> Types"
> > > > > > > and "BGP-LS NLRI and Attribute TLVs" registries.  The
> > > > > > > "BGP-LS NLRI and Attribute TLVs" registry was called the
> > > > > > > "BGP-LS Node Descriptor, Link Descriptor, Prefix Descriptor,
> > > > > > > and Attribute TLVs" registry in RFC 7752 and changed by
> > > > > > > 7752bis. The name currently in the IANA registry is "BGP-LS
> > > > > > > NLRI and Attribute TLVs". See
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-ls-parameters/bgp-ls-parameters.xht
> ml#node-descriptor-link-descriptor-prefix-descriptor-attribute-tlv.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > If you choose to retain the reference to RFC 7752, we will
> > > > > > > use the registry name in that document ("BGP-LS Node
> > > > > > > Descriptor, Link Descriptor, Prefix Descriptor, and
> > > > > > > Attribute TLVs"). If you choose to wait to publish at the
> > > > > > > same time as 7752bis, we will use the updated name ("BGP-LS
> NLRI and Attribute TLVs").
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Please see my response to the previous comment.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document
> > > > > > > has been updated as follows. Abbreviations have been
> > > > > > > expanded per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide").
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Original:
> > > > > > >  BGP Link State Extensions for SRv6
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Current:
> > > > > > >  Border Gateway Protocol - Link State (BGP-LS) Extensions
> > > > > > > for Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6)
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Agree
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] Would it be helpful to clarity "a separate document"
> > > > > > > here? Is this referring to a particular RFC?
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Original:
> > > > > > >   The BGP-LS address-family solution for SRv6
> > > > > > >   described in this document is similar to BGP-LS for SR for the
> MPLS
> > > > > > >   data-plane defined in a separate document.
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Yes, that separate document is RFC9085.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] We see two instances each of the following
> > > > > > > phrases in this document. May we update to one form for
> consistency?
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > ...using Direct as the Protocol-ID ...using Direct
> > > > > > > Protocol-ID
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> The first one seems better.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 5) <!-- [rfced] Should "and using" here be updated to either "using"
> or "and uses"?
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Original:
> > > > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a node is advertised via the
> BGP-
> > > > > > >   LS Node NLRI and using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > > > >   ...
> > > > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a link is advertised via the
> BGP-
> > > > > > >   LS Link NLRI and using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > > > >   ...
> > > > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a prefix is advertised via the
> > > > > > >   BGP-LS Prefix NLRI and using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as
> follows:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Perhaps ("using"):
> > > > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a node is advertised via the
> BGP-
> > > > > > >   LS Node NLRI using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > > > >   ...
> > > > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a link is advertised via the
> BGP-
> > > > > > >   LS Link NLRI using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > > > >   ...
> > > > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a prefix is advertised via the
> > > > > > >   BGP-LS Prefix NLRI using the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Or ("and uses"):
> > > > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a node is advertised via the
> BGP-
> > > > > > >   LS Node NLRI and uses the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > > > >   ...
> > > > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a link is advertised via the
> BGP-
> > > > > > >   LS Link NLRI and uses the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as follows:
> > > > > > >   ...
> > > > > > >   The SRv6 information pertaining to a prefix is advertised via the
> > > > > > >   BGP-LS Prefix NLRI and uses the BGP-LS Attribute TLVs as
> follows:
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Your suggestion with "using" is more appropriate.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify "are identical as specified"
> > > > > > > here. Is the meaning that the new MSD types in this document
> > > > > > > have the same description and semantics as the MSD types
> > > > > > > defined in [I-D.ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions]? Note that
> > > > > > > this sentence appears twice in the document.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Original:
> > > > > > >   The description and semantics of these new MSD-
> > > > > > >   types for BGP-LS are identical as specified in
> > > > > > >   [I-D.ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions].
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Perhaps:
> > > > > > >   The description and semantics of these new MSD-
> > > > > > >   types for BGP-LS are identical to those specified in
> > > > > > >   [RFC9352].
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Agree with your proposal.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify "for IGPs, direct, and static
> configuration" here.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Original:
> > > > > > >   *  Local Node Descriptors TLV: set of Node Descriptor TLVs for
> the
> > > > > > >      local node, as defined in [RFC7752] for IGPs, direct, and
> static
> > > > > > >      configuration or as defined in [RFC9086] for BGP protocol.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Perhaps:
> > > > > > >   Local Node Descriptors TLV:  Set of Node Descriptor TLVs for
> the
> > > > > > >      local node as defined in [RFC7752] for IGPs, the Direct
> Protocol-ID,
> > > > > > >      and the Static configuration Protocol-ID or as defined in
> [RFC9086] for BGP.
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Agree with your proposal.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 8) <!-- [rfced] How may we update this text for clarity?
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Original:
> > > > > > >   For SRv6 SIDs corresponding to BGP EPE and when advertising
> SRv6 SID
> > > > > > >   using Direct Protocol-ID, none are defined currently and they
> MUST
> > > > > > >   be set to 0 when originated and ignored on receipt.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Perhaps:
> > > > > > >   No flags are currently defined for SRv6 SIDs corresponding to
> BGP EPE
> > > > > > >   or for advertisement of a SRv6 SID using the Direct Protocol-ID.
> Flags MUST
> > > > > > >   be set to 0 when originated and ignored on receipt.
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Agree with your proposal.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] We have updated "SET" to "set" at the end of
> > > > > > > this sentence. Please let us know any objections.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Original:
> > > > > > >   For SRv6 BGP EPE Peer Set SID,
> > > > > > >   multiple instances of this TLV (one for each peer in the "peer
> set")
> > > > > > >   are associated with the SRv6 SID and the S-Flag is SET.
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Agree.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 10) <!-- [rfced] Section 9.2: FYI - We have updated the name
> > > > > > > of the registry in this section to "BGP-LS NLRI and
> > > > > > > Attribute TLVs" to match the title currently in the IANA
> > > > > > > registry (renamed per draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis). Depending
> > > > > > > on the response to our question #1, we will either use the
> > > > > > > name of the registry per RFC
> > > > > > > 7752 ("BGP-LS Node Descriptor, Link Descriptor, Prefix
> > > > > > > Descriptor, and Attribute TLVs") or the name per
> draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis ("BGP-LS NLRI and Attribute TLVs").
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Link to registry:
> > > > > > > https://ww/
> > > > > > >
> w.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fbgp-ls-parameters%2Fbgp-ls-parame
> > > > > > > ters.xht
> > > > > > > ml%23node-descriptor-link-descriptor-prefix-descriptor-attri
> > > > > > > bute-tlv
> > > > > > >
> &data=05%7C01%7Cbruno.decraene%40orange.com%7C02e864ba4d2644
> > > > > > > ae030b08
> > > > > > >
> dbe2387dea%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C6383
> > > > > > > 52504486
> > > > > > >
> 493467%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV
> > > > > > > 2luMzIiL
> > > > > > >
> CJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=gaQ%2FEI
> > > > > > > 6K85rcFc
> > > > > > > REDGBmBklZCqyiaN2x6y06GocnAks%3D&reserved=0
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Please refer to my response to the first point.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 11) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that "set up to routers" is correct.
> > > > > > > Or should this be updated to "set up for routers" ("for"
> > > > > > > instead of "to")? Also, is the capitaliation of "Link-State" correct?
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Original:
> > > > > > >   BGP peering sessions for
> > > > > > >   address-families other than Link-State may be set up to routers
> > > > > > >   outside the SR domain.
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> "set up to" is correct and the capitalization is correct as well.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 12) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > a) We note inconsistencies in the terms below throughout the text.
> > > > > > > Should either the closed or open form be used consistently?
> > > > > > > Or should "PeerSet" and "PeerNode" be used when followed by
> "SID", and then "Peer Set" and "Peer Node"
> > > > > > > be used elsewhere? We see "PeerSet SID" in RFCs 8402 and
> > > > > > > 9086, and we see "PeerNode SID" in RFC 9086.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > PeerSet vs. Peer Set
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > PeerNode vs. Peer Node
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> We should follow RFC8402 and RFC9086.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > b) This relates to the question above. The name of the TLV
> > > > > > > defined in Section
> > > > > > > 7.2 is "SRv6 BGP Peer Node SID TLV". Should this be updated
> > > > > > > to "SRv6 BGP PeerNode SID TLV" (with "PeerNode" rather than
> > > > > > > "Peer Node")? If so, we will ask IANA to update the registry
> accordingly prior to publication.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Link to registry:
> > > > > > > https://ww/
> > > > > > >
> w.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fbgp-ls-parameters%2Fbgp-ls-parame
> > > > > > > ters.xht
> > > > > > >
> ml%23srv6-bgp-epe-sid&data=05%7C01%7Cbruno.decraene%40orange
> > > > > > > .com%7C0
> > > > > > >
> 2e864ba4d2644ae030b08dbe2387dea%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b
> > > > > > > 6f5d20%7
> > > > > > >
> C0%7C0%7C638352504486493467%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIj
> oi
> > > > > > > MC4wLjAw
> > > > > > >
> MDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C
> > > > > > > %7C%7C&s
> > > > > > >
> data=UZTWlxX52BAcCCG4ksC44OVyygPlgW8pvf0iv6m9wh8%3D&reserved
> > > > > > > =0
> > > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Agree. Let us update as per the terminology in RFC8402/9086.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > c) May we update the instance of "peer sessions" in this
> > > > > > > sentence to "peering sessions" to match usage elsewhere in the
> document?
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Original:
> > > > > > >   ...therefore MAY be assigned to one or more
> > > > > > >   End.X SIDs associated with BGP peer sessions.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> "peering sessions" is more appropriate.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > d) FYI, we updated "SRv6 BGP EPE Peer Node SID TLV" to "SRv6
> BGP Peer Node SID TLV"
> > > > > > > (no "EPE") for consistency with the name used elswhere in the
> document.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Original:
> > > > > > >   *  The BGP EPE Peer Node context for a PeerNode SID, and the
> Peer Set
> > > > > > >      context for a PeerSet SID [RFC8402] are advertised via the
> SRv6
> > > > > > >      BGP EPE Peer Node SID TLV (Section 7.2),
> > > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Agree.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > e) FYI, we updated "OSPFv3 SRv6 LAN End.X sub-TLV" here to
> > > > > > > "OSPFv3
> > > > > > > SRv6 LAN End.X SID sub-TLV" (with "SID") to match usage in
> > > > > > > Section
> > > > > > > 9.2 of RFC-to-be 9513.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Original:
> > > > > > >   The information advertised via this TLV is derived from the IS-IS
> SRv6
> > > > > > >   LAN End.X SID sub-TLV (section 8.2 of
> > > > > > >   [I-D.ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions]) or the OSPFv3 SRv6 LAN End.X
> > > > > > >   sub-TLV (section 9.2 of [I-D.ietf-lsr-ospfv3-srv6-extensions]) in
> the
> > > > > > >   case of IS-IS or OSPFv3 respectively.
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Agree. "SID" is required in the name.
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 13) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language"
> > > > > > > portion of the online Style Guide <https://w/
> > > > > > > ww.rfc-editor.org%2Fstyleguide%2Fpart2%2F%23inclusive_langua
> > > > > > > ge&data=
> > > > > > >
> 05%7C01%7Cbruno.decraene%40orange.com%7C02e864ba4d2644ae030b
> > > > > > > 08dbe238
> > > > > > >
> 7dea%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C6383525044
> 86493467%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoi
> V2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=e
> xDdgSsc6tdwamgMDodmQ%2BHPbUePBXozcdbw9T75RMI%3D&reserved=0>
> and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script did not flag
> any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a best practice.
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Ack
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > 14) <!-- [rfced] FYI - Expansions for abbreviations have
> > > > > > > been added upon first use per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style
> Guide").
> > > > > > > Please review each expansion in the document carefully to ensure
> correctness.
> > > > > > > -->
> > > > > >
> > > > > > KT> Ack.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Thanks,
> > > > > > Ketan
> > > > > >   >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Thank you.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > RFC Editor/mc/rv
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > On Oct 30, 2023, at 5:05 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > *****IMPORTANT*****
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Updated 2023/10/30
> > > > > > >
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