Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9555 <draft-ietf-calext-jscontact-vcard-13> for your review

[Robert Stepanek <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

attached is the updated document. Please see my replies below.

On Thu, Apr 4, 2024, at 2:08 AM, Karen Moore wrote:
> 1) Note that “vcard” is not on the list of acceptable sourcecode types. Please review the list at "https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/sourcecode-types.txt” and let us know if there is an applicable type that may be used instead of "vcard". If there isn’t one, you may suggest a new one (that we would run by RPAT for approval), or you can leave the “type" attribute blank. 

We now changed the sourcecode type to "text/vcard". We'll keep using "json" instead of "application/jscontact+json" for the JSContact examples.

> 
> 2) The text below is referencing Section 2.3.15; however, this text is located in Section 2.3.15. Is the intention perhaps to reference Figure 5 or another section? Or should the section reference be removed?
> 
> Current:
>    The value of the SCRIPT parameter converts to the phoneticScript
>    property (see Section 2.3.15).

This was a mistake. I now updated the document to refer to Section 2.3.19.

> 
> 3) The following lines are longer than the 72-character limit. Please let us know how you would like to break the lines.
> 
> Original:
>    (Figure 12)
>    N;SORT-AS="Stevenson,John Philip":Stevenson;John;Philip,Paul;Dr.;Jr.,M.D.,A.C.P.;;Jr. (16 over)
> 
>    (Figure 15)
>    ADR;TYPE=work;CC=US:;;54321 Oak St;Reston;VA;20190;USA;;;;54321;Oak St;;;;;; (7 over)
> 
>    (Section 3.3.1)
>    DQUOTE [jscomps-entry-sep ] ";" jscomps-entrylist DQUOTE (12 over)
>   
>    jscomps-entry-verb = *QSAFE-CHAR ; encode special characters according to RFC 6868 (16 over)
> 
>    (Figure 53)
>    N;JSCOMPS=";1;2;2,1;0;6;4,1":Stevenson;John;Philip,Paul;;Jr.,M.D.;;Jr. (4 over)
> 
>    (Figure 54)
>    ADR;JSCOMPS="s,\, ;11;s, ;10;3":;;54321 Oak St;Reston;;;;;;;Oak St;54321;;;;;; (12 over)

I now reformatted the examples and ABNF to not exceed the 72-character limit.

> 4) May we update the following sentence for clarity? Note that there is one other similar instance. Please let us know if the suggested text retains the intended meaning or if you prefer otherwise.
> 
> Current:
>   The PREF parameter (Section 5.3 of [RFC6350]) converts to the pref
>    property of that JSContact object, to which the vCard property having
>    this parameter converts.
> 
> Perhaps:
>    The PREF parameter (Section 5.3 of [RFC6350]) and the vCard property 
>     that has this parameter convert to the pref property of the JSContact object.
 
I'm not happy with the Current sentence either, but the suggested update changes the meaning.

The background is this: a vCard property converts to a JSContact object. If the vCard property has the PREF parameter set, then the value of that vCard parameter converts to the "pref" property of the JSContact object to which the property converted to.

I'd be happy to use a simpler phrasing than the current one, but I struggle to come up with it.

> 
> 5) Note: once we have finished this round of editing, we will ask the AD to approve several changes that are beyond editorial.

Thanks,
Robert

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> > On Apr 2, 2024, at 5:57 AM, Robert Stepanek <rsto=[e-mail]> wrote:
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> > Dear Editors,
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> > thanks for your review. We now updated the document (attached) accordingly.
> > 
> > Best regards,
> > Robert
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> >> RFC9555 (draft-ietf-calext-jscontact-vcard-13)
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> >> Title            : JSContact: Converting from and to vCard
> >> Author(s)        : M. Loffredo, R. Stepanek
> >> WG Chair(s)      : Bron Gondwana, Daniel Migault
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