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Authors, While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that we expanded "ALTO" in the document title, per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide") (https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7322). Please review. Original: ALTO Performance Cost Metrics Currently: Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Performance Cost Metrics --> 2) <!-- [rfced] Authors' Addresses: Please advise regarding the listed zip code for Y. Richard Yang. We see "06520" here, but please note that RFCs 7285, 9240, 9241, and 9275 use 06511 but RFC 8896 uses 06520. Which is correct? Original: Y. Richard Yang Yale University 51 Prospect St New Haven, CT 06520 United States of America Email: yry@cs.yale.edu --> 3) <!-- [rfced] Sections 1 and 3.1: Are the quotes around the words "where" and "how" necessary? Original: This document registers a set of new cost metrics (Table 1) to allow applications to determine "where" to connect based on network performance criteria including delay and bandwidth related metrics. ... The core additional details of a performance metric specify "how" the metric is obtained. --> 4) <!-- [rfced] Table 1: a) Should "sum Unidirectional Delay" be "sum of Unidirectional Delays"? It appears that one or more words are missing. b) To what does "from above" refer? c) Should "sum of Unidirectional Delay Variation" be "sum of Unidirectional Delay Variations"? Original: sum Unidirectional Delay ... Base: Sum of two directions from above ... sum of Unidirectional Delay Variation --> 5) <!-- [rfced] Section 1: This sentence is difficult to interpret. Please clarify "... metrics, to expose to application-layer traffic optimization, can be a typical mechanism by network operators". Original: Deriving ALTO cost performance metrics from existing network-layer traffic engineering performance metrics, to expose to application-layer traffic optimization, can be a typical mechanism by network operators to deploy ALTO [RFC7971], [FlowDirector]. --> 6) <!-- [rfced] Section 1: Because the capitalization of the terms in this paragraph indicates that these are proper terms but we could not find these specific terms in the RFCs cited here, may we update as suggested? If not, please provide clarifying text. Original: The common metrics Min/Max Unidirectional Delay defined in [RFC8570][RFC8571] and Max Link Bandwidth defined in [RFC3630,RFC5305] are not listed in Table 1 because they can be handled by applying the statistical operators defined in this document. The metrics related with utilized bandwidth and reservable bandwidth (i.e., Max Reservable BW and Unreserved BW defined in [RFC3630,RFC5305]) are outside the scope of this document. Suggested: The Min/Max Unidirectional Link Delay metric as defined in [RFC8570] and [RFC8571], and Maximum (Link) Bandwidth as defined in [RFC3630] and [RFC5305], are not listed in Table 1 because they can be handled by applying the statistical operators defined in this document. The metrics related to utilized bandwidth and reservable bandwidth (i.e., Maximum Reservable (Link) Bandwidth and Unreserved Bandwidth as defined in [RFC3630] and [RFC5305]) are outside the scope of this document. --> 7) <!-- [rfced] Section 3: As this list indicated five items but only contained four (i, ii, iv, and v), we renumbered it. If a fifth item is missing here, please let us know what it is. Original: To address the issue and realize ALTO use cases, for metrics in Table 1, this document defines performance metric identifiers which can be used in the ALTO protocol with well-defined (i) Metric Name, (ii) Metric Description, (iv) Units of Measurement, and (v) Measurement Points, which are always specified by the specific ALTO services; for example, endpoint cost service is between the two endpoints. Currently: To address the issue and realize ALTO use cases for the metrics listed in Table 1, this document defines performance metric identifiers that can be used in the ALTO protocol with the following well-defined items: (1) Metric Name, (2) Metric Description, (3) Units of Measurement, and (4) Measurement Points, which are always specified by the specific ALTO services; for example, the endpoint cost service is between the two endpoints. Hence, the ALTO performance metric identifiers provide basic metric attributes. --> 8) <!-- [rfced] Please review each artwork element in this document. Should any of the artwork elements be tagged as sourcecode (e.g., perhaps "http-message" or "json") or another type of element? Please see <https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/sourcecode-types.txt; if the list on that page does not contain an applicable type, please let us know. --> 9) <!-- [rfced] Figure 1: Please clarify the meaning of "estimation to". Does it mean "estimation of" or something else? Original: Figure 1. A framework to compute estimation to performance metrics --> 10) <!-- [rfced] Section 3.2: "99% percentile" and "99.9% percentile" read oddly, because they read as "99 percent percentile" and "99.9 percent percentile". Should these be "99th percentile" and "99.9th percentile", per "95th percentile" as used in Section 4? Original: For example, delay- ow:p99 gives the 99% percentile of observed one-way delay; delay- ow:p99.9 gives the 99.9% percentile. --> 11) <!-- [rfced] Section 3.2: Please note that because we did not see any mention of "32", "character", or "metric" in RFC 7258 ("Pervasive Monitoring Is an Attack"), we did a search and found the relevant text in Section 10.6 of RFC 7285. We updated the number accordingly. Please let us know any concerns. Original: Note that RFC 7258 limits the overall cost metric identifier to 32 characters. Currently: Note that [RFC7285] limits the overall cost metric identifier to 32 characters. --> 12) <!-- [rfced] Section 4: Should "set of delays {pkt.delay}" be "set of (pkt.delay) entries" per "(pkt.delay)", "(pkt.dropped)", and "(pkt.hopcount)" earlier in this paragraph? We ask because we do not see curly brackets used around "pkt." items anywhere else in this document. Original (the previous sentence is included for context): The measures of each individual packet (pkt) can include the delay from the time when the packet enters the network to the time when the packet leaves the network (pkt.delay); whether the packet is dropped before reaching the destination (pkt.dropped); the number of network hops that the packet traverses (pkt.hopcount). The semantics of the performance metrics defined in this section are that they are statistics computed from these measures; for example, the x-percentile of the one-way delay is the x-percentile of the set of delays {pkt.delay} for the packets in the stream. --> 13) <!-- [rfced] Sections 4.1.3, 4.2.3, and 4.3.3: We had trouble following the meaning of these sentences. If the suggested text is not correct, please provide clarifying text. Original: A non-normative reference definition of end-to-end one-way delay is [RFC7679]. ... A non-normative reference definition of end-to-end round-trip delay is [RFC2681]. ... A non-normative reference definition of end-to-end one-way delay variation is [RFC3393]. Suggested: A non-normative definition of the end-to-end one-way delay metric is provided in [RFC7679]. ... A non-normative definition of the end-to-end round-trip delay metric is provided in [RFC2681]. ... A non-normative definition of the one-way delay variation metric is provided in [RFC3393]. --> 14) <!-- [rfced] Examples 1 through 8 (Sections 4.1.3 and subsequent): a) We moved the "Example" information (e.g., "Example 1") from the body of the <artwork> elements to figure titles. Please let us know any concerns. b) As the numbering scheme for the examples was misordered (... 3, 5, 4, 5, 7, 8), we also ordered the numbering. c) We found "value on" a bit confusing. Does it mean "value for", "value of", or something else? Original numbering scheme: Example 1: Delay value on source-destination endpoint pairs ... Example 1a: Delay value on source-destination endpoint pairs for IPv6 ... Example 2: Round-trip Delay of source-destination endpoint pairs ... Example 3: Delay variation value on source-destination endpoint pairs ... Example 5: Loss rate value on source-destination endpoint pairs ... Example 4: hopcount value on source-destination endpoint pairs ... Example 5: TCP throughput value on source-destination endpoint pairs ... Example 7: bw-residual value on source-destination endpoint pairs ... Example 8: bw-available value on source-destination endpoint pairs Currently: Figure 2: Delay Value on Source-Destination Endpoint Pairs (Example 1) ... Figure 3: Delay Value on Source-Destination Endpoint Pairs for IPv6 (Example 1a) ... Figure 4: Round-Trip Delay of Source-Destination Endpoint Pairs (Example 2) ... Figure 5: Delay Variation Value on Source-Destination Endpoint Pairs (Example 3) ... Figure 6: Loss Rate Value on Source-Destination Endpoint Pairs (Example 4) ... Figure 7: Hop Count Value on Source-Destination Endpoint Pairs (Example 5) ... Figure 8: TCP Throughput Value on Source-Destination Endpoint Pairs (Example 6) ... Figure 9: Residual Bandwidth Value on Source-Destination Endpoint Pairs (Example 7) ... Figure 10: Available Bandwidth Value on Source-Destination Endpoint Pairs (Example 8) --> 15) <!-- [rfced] Section 4.1.4: Please clarify the meaning of "the URI to the URI field" in this sentence. Original ("RECOMMEDED" has been fixed): If the estimation is from the IPPM measurement framework, it is RECOMMEDED that the "parameters" field of an "estimation" one-way delay metric includes the following information: the URI to the URI field of the IPPM metric defined in the IPPM performance metric [IANA-IPPM] registry (e.g., https://www.iana.org/assignments/ performance-metrics/OWDelay_Active_IP-UDP-Poisson- Payload250B_RFC8912sec7_Seconds_95Percentile). Possibly (as we see that all other field names are quoted): If the estimation is from the IPPM measurement framework, it is RECOMMENDED that the "parameters" field of an "estimation" one-way delay metric include the URI in the "URI" field of the IPPM metric defined in the IPPM "Performance Metrics" registry [IANA-IPPM] (e.g., <https://www.iana.org/assignments/performance-metrics/ OWDelay_Active_IP-UDP-Poisson-Payload250B_RFC8912sec7_Seconds_ 95Percentile>). --> 16) <!-- [rfced] Section 4.3.3: To what does "the one" refer in this sentence? If the suggested text is not correct, please provide clarifying text. Original: This document defines the specific case that F selects as the "first" packet the one with the smallest one-way delay. Suggested: This document defines the specific case where F selects the packet with the smallest one-way delay as the "first" packet. --> 17) <!-- [rfced] Section 4.3.3: To what does "it" refer in this sentence - the mean, or something else? Original (the previous sentence is included for context): Note that in statistics, variations are typically evaluated by the distance from samples relative to the mean. In networking context, it is more commonly defined from samples relative to the min. --> 18) <!-- [rfced] Section 4.4.4: Does "of the average of loss rate" mean "of the average loss rate" or something else? Original ("link link" has been fixed): For estimation by aggregation of routing protocol link metrics, the default aggregation of the average of loss rate is the sum of the link link loss rates. --> 19) <!-- [rfced] Section 4.5.4: Does "hop count" in these sentences mean "the hop count", "the hop count metric", or something else? Also, we see "estimating hopcounts" a couple lines later; does that mean "hopcount values", "hop counts", or something else? Original: "nominal": Typically hop count does not have a nominal value. ... "sla": Typically hop count does not have an SLA value. "estimation": The exact estimation method is out of the scope of this document. An example of estimating hopcounts is by importing from IGP routing protocols. --> 20) <!-- [rfced] Section 5: We could only find three metrics related to throughput and bandwidth: "tput", "bw-residual", and "bw-available". What is the fourth metric? Original: This section introduces four throughput/bandwidth related metrics. --> 21) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.1.3: "a TCP congestion-control conforming flow" reads a bit oddly. Does it mean "a conformant TCP congestion control flow" or something else? Original: Intended Semantics: To give the throughput of a TCP congestion- control conforming flow from the specified source to the specified destination. --> 22) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.1.4: This sentence does not parse. Please clarify "provide estimation to", "set to [I-D.ietf-tcpm-rfc8312bis]", and "for an ongoing congestion control algorithm such as BBR, a a link to its specification". Also, should "Cubic" be "CUBIC" per [I-D.ietf-tcpm-rfc8312bis]? Original ("a a" has been fixed): To specify (1), it is RECOMMENDED that the "parameters" field (object) include a field named "congestion-control-algorithm", which provides a URI for the specification of the algorithm; for example, for an ALTO server to provide estimation to the throughput of a Cubic Congestion control flow, its "parameters" includes a field "congestion-control-algorithm", with value being set to [I-D.ietf-tcpm-rfc8312bis]; for an ongoing congestion control algorithm such as BBR, a a link to its specification. --> 23) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.2.3: Should "residual bandwidth from the specified source and the specified destination" be "residual bandwidth from the specified source to the specified destination"? We ask because we see "available bandwidth from the specified source to the specified destination" in Section 5.3.3. Also, we could not find the word "capacity" or the string "max" used in the context of maximum bandwidth in RFC 8571. Will this particular citation be clear to readers? (We see "Maximum Bandwidth (i.e., the link capacity)" and "maximum bandwidth (i.e., the link capacity)" in RFCs 7471 and 8570, respectively, but nothing similar in RFC 8571.) Original: Intended Semantics: To specify temporal and spatial residual bandwidth from the specified source and the specified destination. ... When the max statistical operator is defined for the metric, it typically provides the minimum of the link capacities along the path, as the default value of the residual bandwidth of a link is its link capacity [RFC8571,8570,7471]. --> 24) <!-- [rfced] Sections 5.2.4 and 5.3.4: "entry in Section 4.1.4 on aggregation of routing protocol link metrics" in these two sentences reads oddly and doesn't seem necessary. If the suggested text is not correct, please clarify. Original: "estimation": See the "estimation" entry in Section 4.1.4 on aggregation of routing protocol link metrics. ... "estimation": See the "estimation" entry in Section 4.1.4 on aggregation of routing protocol link metrics. Suggested: "estimation": See the "estimation" entry in Section 4.1.4. ... "estimation": See the "estimation" entry in Section 4.1.4. --> 25) <!-- [rfced] Section 6: This sentence is not clear as written. If the suggested text is not correct, please clarify the meaning of "this document specifies common issues unless one metric has its unique challenges". Original (the previous sentence is included for context): Also, the performance metrics specified in this document are similar, in that they may use similar data sources and have similar issues in their calculation. Hence, this document specifies common issues unless one metric has its unique challenges. Suggested: Hence, this document specifies issues that the performance metrics might have in common and also discusses challenges regarding the computation of ALTO performance metrics (Section 6.4). --> 26) <!-- [rfced] Section 7: Please review the following. In the case of item c), please let us know how this document should be updated. a) We changed "ALTO Server" and "ALTO Client" to "ALTO server" and "ALTO client" per usage in RFC 7285. b) We removed the quotes in the second sentence, as the comparable sentence in Section 8.3.5 of RFC 7285 cites RFCs 2818 and 5246, both of which are obsolete. From Section 8.3.5 of RFC 7285: ALTO server implementations as well as ALTO client implementations MUST support the "https" URI scheme [RFC2818] and Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC5246]. c) RFC 7230 has been obsoleted by RFCs 9110 and 9112. In the case of this document, it is not clear whether we should cite RFC 9110 and/or RFC 9112. Please let us know which RFC should be cited. Original (this document): As specified in "Protection Strategies" (Section 15.3.2 of [RFC7285]), the ALTO Server should authenticate ALTO Clients when transmitting an ALTO information resource containing sensitive TE performance metrics. "Authentication and Encryption" (Section 8.3.5 of [RFC7285]) specifies that "ALTO Server implementations as well as ALTO Client implementations MUST support the "https" URI scheme of [RFC7230] and Transport Layer Security (TLS) of [RFC8446]". Currently (still cites obsoleted RFC 7230): As specified in Section 15.3.2 ("Protection Strategies") of [RFC7285], the ALTO server should authenticate ALTO clients when transmitting an ALTO information resource containing sensitive TE performance metrics. Section 8.3.5 ("Authentication and Encryption") of [RFC7285] specifies that ALTO server implementations as well as ALTO client implementations MUST support the "https" URI scheme [RFC7230] and Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC8446]. --> 27) <!-- [rfced] We have included some specific questions about the IANA text below. In addition to responding to those questions, please review all of the IANA-related updates carefully and let us know if any further updates are needed. a) FYI - For clarity, we created subsections within Section 8. Currently: 8.1 ALTO Cost Metric Registry 8.2 ALTO Cost Source Registry b) Section 8.2. May we change '"ALTO Cost Source" registry' here and in Section 3.1 to '"ALTO Cost Source Types" registry', to match the plural style used for all other registries listed on <https://www.iana.org/assignments/alto-protocol/>? If you agree to this change, we will ask IANA to update their page accordingly. Original (Section 3.1 and this section): The "cost-source" field of the "cost-context" field MUST be one registered in "ALTO Cost Source" registry (Section 8). ... This document requests the creation of the "ALTO Cost Source" registry. Suggested: The "cost-source" field of the "cost-context" field MUST be one that is registered in the "ALTO Cost Source Types" registry (Section 8). ... This document has created the "ALTO Cost Source Types" registry. c) Section 8.2. The last column in Table 3 does not match the last column in the "ALTO Cost Source" registry at <https://www.iana.org/assignments/alto-protocol/>. In Table 3, the column is named "Security Considerations" and points to Section 7 of this document whereas the column in the IANA registry is named "References" and points to this document. Should the IANA registry be updated to match Table 3? --> 28) <!-- [rfced] References: We could not find a URL or DOI for [Prophet]. Also, we couldn't locate it via ACM/IEEE Transactions on Networking 2020. Is this article available online somewhere and not behind a paywall? Original: [Prophet] Gao, K., Zhang, J., and YR. Yang, "Prophet: Fast, Accurate Throughput Prediction with Reactive Flows", ACM/IEEE Transactions on Networking July, 2020. --> 29) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online Style Guide at <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>, and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a best practice. --> 30) <!-- [rfced] The following terms appear to be used inconsistently in this document. Please let us know which form is preferred. an "sla" value (Sections 5.2.4 and 5.3.4) / an SLA value (Sections 4.5.4 and 5.1.4) Available Bandwidth / available bandwidth (used generally in running text) Delay Variation / delay variation (in running text)* Hop Count / hop count (in running text)* Loss Rate / loss rate (in running text)* method of measurement or calculation / Method of Measurement or Calculation (e.g., "about the method of measurement or calculation", "such as Method of Measurement or Calculation") One-way Delay / one-way delay (in running text)* Residual Bandwidth / Residual bandwidth (metric) (in running text) (We also see "residual bandwidth".) Round-trip Delay / round-trip delay (in running text)* * For example, compare the sentence just after Table 1, the "These eight performance metrics can be classified" sentence, and the first sentence of Section 4. --> Thank you. 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Thank you for your cooperation, RFC Editor -------------------------------------- RFC9439 (draft-ietf-alto-performance-metrics-28) Title : ALTO Performance Cost Metrics Author(s) : Q. Wu, Y. Yang, Y. Lee, D. Dhody, S. Randriamasy, L. Contreras WG Chair(s) : Jan Seedorf, Mohamed Boucadair, Qin Wu Area Director(s) : Martin Duke, Zaheduzzaman Sarker
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